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jimiboy
2008-07-13
ch 1,
abusecol. i am loveing this(metaphoricly).why edwad as lando? i tink he shoud be emporer palpatene. as mr.averige said "may the force be with you"
Mr. Average
2008-06-11
ch 9,
abuseThis is great. Absolutely hilarious. Though I wonder if you'll find a way to get Grechen and/or Nina involved in a future episode. Like episode 1 where Nina's Quieen Amidalia/Padme or something. Anyway, I look forward to your next update. My the force be with you. Peace
Broken Winged Butterfly
2008-06-07
ch 9,
abuse"That's because, unlike droids, Wookies can pull people's arms out of their sockets." I found that line to be hilarious for some reason. Good job btw.
wolfgrl1492
2008-06-07
ch 9,
abuseGreat chapter. I love the scene with Samson trying to pull Clam's arms off.
wolfgrl1492
2008-05-28
ch 8,
abuseI love the CD part. That was hilarious.
Broken Winged Butterfly
2008-05-28
ch 8,
abuselol, Slinkman's a Star Wars nerd.

I love Samson's lines in this, very in-character and funny too.

I was wonderin' if you were gonna cut back to the campfire or not. Nice job with that to remind readers that Lazlo's telling a story. I could also see Edward cutting in to complain about why he isn't in the story or maybe a few Squirrel Scouts(Patsy, Nina & Gretchen) could show up to see what's going on.
wolfgrl1492
2008-05-13
ch 6,
abuseNice chapter. I love how you kept Lumpus and Raj in character.
wolfgrl1492
2008-05-06
ch 5,
abuseYes! Finally Slinkman has arrived. I'm seriously going to sit down and try to draw these characters so it looks like the movie cover.
Broken Winged Butterfly
2008-05-06
ch 5,
abuseDitto on that, I can't wait for Han and Chewbacca either!

Pretty funny chap. I luv Obi Wan, he's my fav. Slinkman too.

Keep it up! :)
wolfgrl1492
2008-05-02
ch 4,
abuseNice chapter. I like how you made Raj like Luke, but at the same time kept his personality
wolfgrl1492
2008-04-26
ch 3,
abuseYes! Great chapter. Though I hope you bring Raj's personality out more next chapter.
Broken Winged Butterfly
2008-04-25
ch 2,
abuseOMG! A Star Wars parody!

Very clever and funny. Can't wait to see more. I also love where you placed all of the characters, and I mean all of them.

Please update soon!
wolfgrl1492
2008-04-24
ch 2,
abuseYes! Awesomeness! Keep it coming!
gameshowparodies
2008-04-23
ch 2,
abuseThis is a really cool story. Please update it soon!
wolfgrl1492
2008-04-20
ch 1,
abuseThis sounds like it's going to be a great story. Update it soon.
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