*cries* That was beautiful!

Interesting, and it's nice to find a V/W story, here. The cut and dry aspect of the narration paralleled the situation very well, as well as Vash's emotions and thought process. I did notice a missing 'i' in Knives' name around the end of the story, but all in all, a nicely done work of art.
Take care,
~September's Nobara.