kute (:

Ah, Marluxia: ye olde all purpose pedophile. X3 But no, it was cute. In a...way. Yes. Cute. Cute is good.

kfk;lakfj;aj;~!!

Loren, I think you've killed me.

I love the flow of this piece and the repetition is just killer. Seriously, reading this fanfic was incredibly pleasant. And tooth-achingly awesome at points.

I mean, comeon? It's Marluxia/Axel and, um, I'm a total Marluxia-not-as-a-wanton-uke-but-as,-um,-not-wanton-uke?! whore. Seriously. AND YOU ACHIEVE THAT.

And Kairi being totally kid-like and adorable and Kairi is a plus.

!! I love this so much Loren, you have no idea.