Reviews for Angels Among Us

Reviews For: Angels Among Us

Kazaam 2008-06-18 ch 2, anon.	abuseI like how Zack's conversation with Cloud turned out, about all the things he has to do now! Poor Zack for being so overwhelmed with everything. It's got to be so difficult! LOL @ Zack complementing his own cooking. XD Aw, the scenes with Seph and Sun were so adorable!^^ I love how he actually helped a bit with the cookies, and was afraid he'd ruin her day if he told her why he was there. And I just love the whole idea of William learning how to make cookies!^^ and is amused at the image of him throwing pizza dough in the air.
Ardwynna Morrigu 2008-06-18 ch 2,	abuseI love how close-knit the boys are in this verse, but that little detail about them being concerned for Seph while he's on his evening strolls really filled me with the Aw! Sun's a very grounded little lady and watching her teach William was cute too.
Chibi Cheesecake 2008-06-18 ch 2,	abuseGOD DAISY NOW I'D PRETTY MUCH KILL FOR A BAKED POTATO. THANKS. XD But seriously, domestic!Zack is so much love. I really want him to make me dinner. XD Can I borrow him for a night? You know, I couldn't even tell you'd been having trouble with this chapter. ^^ Nothing seemed rushed or anything. Also, AWW WILLIAM! DIES Not even the great Sephiroth can resist the lure of chocolate chip cookies. XP And it was so adorable how he was concerned about making Sun upset and at the same time being like, "what's wrong with me?" Aw, Seph... Really fun chapter!
Crystal Rose of Pollux 2008-06-18 ch 2,	abuseI love that opening scene of Zack and the flatware! And his "we should all get cell phones" line! Yay at another mystery! And, aww, the scene with Sun and the cookies was adorable! And Seph being "unaware" of his smile!
SeraphChronoMage 2008-06-18 ch 2,	abuseIt's been a long time since you updated this story, I was getting worried! I always appreciate your KH stuff a whole lot. You're so creative!
SeraphChronoMage 2008-04-20 ch 1,	abuseI like your stories and everything, but the timeline confuses me a little sometimes. You don't post them in any knid of linear fashion, really. Not that I'm complaining or anything, it just makes it a little confusing.
Chibi Cheesecake 2008-04-19 ch 1,	abuseHee, Andréa really is like Lana Skye-! XD It's really cool, though. I like the vague PW influences. Anywho, yay for appearances from Tifa and the Restoration Committee! They're all so cute. XD still loves that bit from KH2 where Aerith figures out the computer when Leon can't Very interested to see where you'll take this next!
Masked Tarrentella 2008-04-19 ch 1, anon.	abuseVery good. I read God helps the outcasts. I hope this on is just as great as the last one.
Kazaam 2008-04-18 ch 1, anon.	abusesnickers at the broom. Those are just so amusing! It was interesting reading about Tifa, and how she may have suspected him of setting the fires before learning about the clones. It does seem like she'd be more wary of him, even if Cloud had become friends with him! But I like how she seems to be making an effort to be nice to him.^^ Everything that you added to this really came out so well!^^ And I really like how Seph stayed to help everyone. And yay for Zack getting better!^^ He'll be doing cartwheels in no time. XD I still love that name! Andréa Duncan is so cool.^^ Oh, and I really like how this mystery's been set up! Everything from Andréa being the high prosecutor to everyone who was involved with the project meeting such a horrible fate... Now I'm really curious to find out where it's all gonna lead! Can't wait for more!^^
Crystal Rose of Pollux 2008-04-18 ch 1,	abuseAww, I love how Seph seems to be mellowing out! Reminds me of your Seto fics, in a way! His dialogue with Tifa was adorable! And yay for Zack going back to his old self! I know I've mentioned this before, but I really do love the way you portray him! Kala-Ansa, involved with research? Oh, a great twist! I'm looking forward to reading more! Great work!
Ardwynna Morrigu 2008-04-18 ch 1,	abuseA little bit of gap-filling can do a lot sometimes, increasing the level of detail available, making things seem more realistic.
1wngdngl 2008-04-17 ch 1,	abuseWow, fic sequels coming from dreams o-o Now I wonder what parts were in the dream itself... What? Pair Seph with a just-added OC? Silly readers..
Manders1953 2008-04-17 ch 1,	abuseWee! ^_^ Keep going! I like what you got so far!

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