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Suyi 2008-10-19 . chapter 10
dude!! your an amazing writer! i cant wait until the next chapter!
hope you update really soon!
Black-Kat-585 2008-10-17 . chapter 10
Oh wow...

Update please?
yumeniai 2008-09-03 . chapter 10
Wow! I can't wait to see what happens next, i'm completely hooked on your series! Please update soon!
Niri 2008-08-15 . chapter 10
I love your story - all the unexpected twists...everything! Please don't give up!!

I really liked the scene with Tomoyo's singing, how her emotions affected the crowd...what song was that?
butterflyangellover14 2008-07-28 . chapter 10
oh no...I hope everyone is okay...continue soon please! awesome chapter!
CheeseyCraziness 2008-07-26 . chapter 10
Oh my god
SnowCharms 2008-07-26 . chapter 10
I thought that by now Tomoyo would understand that thoughts as powerful and murderous as hers could be lethal when around a devious bastard like Eriol...update! I'm guessing that the saber came from Eriol's belt buckle?
Sakura Petal Wings 2008-07-26 . chapter 10
Where is sakura now?!?!?!
what happened to syaoran?!?!?!
PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE UPDATE SOON!
animegirl115 2008-07-26 . chapter 10
nice to see u updated! wow, intense, cant wait to read more, gomen ne that it took me a while to get to this, im reading another story at the moment! GOMEN NE! Please update!

^_^
Shiona Acitiu 2008-07-26 . chapter 10
Whoa...What the hell happened...
mY pHoEnIx tEaRs11 2008-07-26 . chapter 10
Whoa!! A new level of evil! lol. I may even think that Eriol could have taken this a little too far. I do, however, like the way that Tomoyo is used like a type of puppet to help with his dastardly plans. Or should I say Queen, as you so eloquently put it.

This is, yet again, an amazingly fueled chapter. I quite enjoyed your song as well. If sung correctly, such emotion can be hard to disguise. The lyrics were real meaningful and deep, hitting real close to home with the pain that Tomoyo feels.

What the hell is Meling doing to Syaoran?! Like, clearly hurting him but, O.O It sounds like she is on the verge of killing him if she doesn't stop. Anxiously anticipating your next update! May it be soon xD!!

Forever tru

tEaRs11~!
mY pHoEnIx tEaRs11 2008-07-26 . chapter 9
Yay! Lucky for Meiling that the sensei took her on as a teacher herself. It works outs pretty well. That game she plays with her new student is quite amusing too. xD!

forever tru

tEaRs11~!
Crystal Cat-chan 2008-07-26 . chapter 10
So I was expecting fireworks, you have all the major antagonists in the same room, but Eep! I wasn't expecting this! “You should be careful with that. You might hurt someone that doesn't belong to you,” The fact that Eriol is claiming Tomoyo as 'his' *Shiver* Sheesh, this chapter was very Viseral...Very raw. But amazing, the idea of a singer being able to incite her male audience to rape is an intresting one, my first inclination is to say a 'good' one, but there is nothing nice about this senario... I don't know how anyone of them will ever accept Tomoyo back after this... SO, Mei Ling punched out her date,Syaoran started to fall under the spell, resisted, dropped Sakura and charged...and then Mei Ling beat the crap out of him? Hum...I have a feeling that the fall out will be intresting. I have to say, great chapter, it had that rawness that I apricate in a book. Can't wait to see the fallout for this, it's going to be messy...Eriol is getting more and more scary. I am not sure waht he is pushing her towards, she seems to have become a little pet project to him, on the side from pushing Sakura to her very edge to handle these things... Hopefully Sakura's magic can handle it...ANd while it might be an added wrinkle, Syaoran did the good thing, he pilled away, he didn't hurt her...Hopefully noone else hurt hers
MikoKagome1113 2008-07-26 . chapter 10
Whoa..what an errotic chapter! I dont like the idea of a song fic, but the on goings in the chapter was too much to think about at once. I do sort of think Eriol went too far with this one, but I still trust Eriol with his decisions. I think he went too far in the manga and anime too, but oh well.

~Miko
butterflyangellover14 2008-07-21 . chapter 9
awesome chapter! aww poor Laishi-san, it was his mother that died, wasn't it?? continue soon please!
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