Reviews for Childhood's Requiem

Byron Whitehead
2008-09-28
ch 1,

abuseI would be lying if I said I disliked the story. It was very suspenseful, everything from the small amount of information you presented to the structure of your sentences. You aimed for a feeling, and you hit the mark.

That being said, I couldn't help but feel detached. I can tell you were aiming for a one-shot, just a quick and dirty write, but I can't help but wonder if there could be a way that you could use this as a pilot of sorts and create an actual story.

Still, whatever you decide to do, good luck.

Dark Habit
2008-04-30
ch 1,

abuseFor one of the most killer, in more ways then one, movies of all time, you made a splendid little story here. I so would turned this in during high school. And yes, that would have given me a one-way ticket to prison, what with gun fears in schools now. XD

Now I wanna write one!

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