OMG. I like this! Maybe you could have Yuki and/or Kyo come and visit Tohru in the next one? That would make it all very dramatic... and interesting! Keep up the fab job!

this is awesome. love the kitchen scene. need, want, gotta have more SOON!

i loved it.

i love this story, and haru/tohru is one of my favorite pairings.

that was awesome
when are you going to be done with chapter 4?

aw thats so sweet i hope to se more soon...no i pray to the great creator for more.. even though your the one writing lol
i am a great fan of kyoru but i love this now i am a fan of...i guess it would still be haru cause hatsuharu+tohru=haru lol
but i gess that could be destiny too

heres my love support and praise for you!!

write more soon please?love from

babyC

Very cool.

Very cool!

Cute!

I love ur story, but...Hatsuharu is a COW. Even though he suppose to be an OX, the author turn him into a COW. Don't know why..

this is a great story

This was a very sweet yet intense chapter since we got to see the real Tohru and not what she makes herself seem to be. *gives Haru plush*

that was so good!please update soon!!good job!

wow, i really like this so far. pretty effing amazing idea if you ask me. im looking forward to your next update! =]

goodie another chapter, um you do know that haru and hatori arent really brothers right? and if they were their mom would be to old to have a child considering there's 11 years between them and haru is in high school, dont worry it's ok in this story, but the only siblings in the zodiac are aya and yuki. i'm sure tohru will work out a way for them to hold sia soon, i mean her chest cant touch theirs but they should be able to interact with her somehow maybe lay her on the floor and they could play with her or sit/lay her in their laps.