Opening part was funny

Alrighty, I like Kazier Gidorah, GO MAN!... er-uh... Gidorah!

Witness, my true power! RAGE! Yeah! That's the way to do it Space-G!


Pretty good. Hopefully the next thing atacking the city is a giant cheese burger so troy &Co. can take it easy.

I'm gonaa assume this ain't gonna turn out very good in the end.

Oh well, at least several of my favorite kaiju will win! :)!

?I dont get it? Idont get it? What happened?

I love this line: You’re picking me up with telekinesis aren’t you Space Godzilla?…Now you are going to throw me into a building…aren’t you?

Space Godzilla laughed. He then through Troy into a building.

Hooray, there are more chapters to read!

you also used my idea to turn king ghidorah into keizer ghidorah

i see you used my suggestions for the castle and the spiral corona beam sorta

awesome

i had an idea of adding minilla (a.k.a minya) into the stroy and if not you can add baby godzlla (a.k.a little godzlla or godzilla jr) into it.

What, or who, is next. Battra?

i think we did a pretty good job this chapter next chapter lets be sure to finish the fight oh and to all the barry fans out there sorry about his death that was kinda my idea except my plan was possibly a lot less painful i don't know i've never died

Hey Cool,

I have only one word for you, Grah! {stops to think} Is Grah, even a word? {shaking head to clear confusion.} Man you gotta stop doing that, just when I'm getting into the story ready for some smashing and pounding you cut me off at the quick {mumbles to self} This is what smokers must feel when they're cut off from thier cigarettes cold turkey. Your putting me into monster mayhem withdrawal. {whining and sobbing} Man what did I ever do to you?

Running out of patience, Legair

you know most people consider monster x who transforms into keizer ghidorah to be king ghidorah so basically you made a second king ghidorah and finally sense these guys are two of the only 4 creatures to ever be killed by a spiral blast try and use one to kill them

i have noticed that when i put

“Transform!” Troy shouted. Dusty, Rose, Irah, Orah, and Mera transformed.

i put the name Dusty. have you noticed this? Dusty is supposed to be Barry. I have made a mistake. I apologize. He will be called Barry next chapetr.

This is very imaginative. You should add more to the story. For instance, tell us more on how Troy and his friends come to have kaiju within themselves. If Godzilla is within Troy, which kaiju are in Dusty, Rose, Irah, Orah, and Merah? Lastly, can Space Godzilla and Monster X transform themselves into kaiju humans?

Keep up the good work!

Space-G AND Monster-X? This oughta be good.