  An-Jelly-Ca 2008-08-24 . chapter 13*sigh* I really, really, hate Fenton.
Anyway,
Great chappie, update soon! I can't wait to see what happens next. :) |
| masondixon 2008-08-14 . chapter 13 I am glad to see this chapter; it has been awhile since the last one. And I am still interested and have to see where this is going. But I have to admit (again) that this entire idea really throws me! I mean where did the idea of Fenton Hardy being such a pyscho come from? I never imagined this at all back when I read the Hardy Boys stories. At first I just thought the idea too out there for me to read but you have done a very good job of "re-creating" the character so it is believable. However if anyone was to read this story and they had never read any of the Hardy Boy books before, this will definitely throw them off from the orginal. Hope there is another chapter up soon. |
| luvnumb3rs 2008-08-14 . chapter 13 Happy to see an update. |
| An-Jelly-Ca 2008-08-06 . chapter 12 o.O Liz? I so did not see that coming.
Great chapter!
Update soon! |
| An-Jelly-Ca 2008-08-06 . chapter 11 I utterly loathe Fenton.
Ugh.
Anyway, great chappie. |
| An-Jelly-Ca 2008-08-06 . chapter 10 o.o Great chapter!
I love, love, love the story.
I shall now go read the next chapter! |
| luvnumb3rs 2008-07-27 . chapter 12 Though this is not my favorite chapter!There just did not seem to be any real development in this chapter. I am just happy to see an update. |
| masondixon 2008-07-21 . chapter 11 Thank you for bringing Charlie back. And for having him call Don too. I am really blown away by the idea of the Hardy Boys' parents being such jerks. Really makes me look at the characters in such a different way than I did when I read the books as a child. You do a really good job with them. Hope the next chapter is soon. |
| Serialgal 2008-07-21 . chapter 11 Welcome back, SR! |
| luvnumb3rs 2008-07-21 . chapter 11 Glad to finally have an update. |
| Lyz 2008-07-18 . chapter 10 Good chapter--way to short though! |
| masondixon 2008-07-14 . chapter 10 Good chapter but way too short. Please update soon. |
| An-Jelly-Ca 2008-07-10 . chapter 9 o.O
Laura has totally cracked. lol.
Fantastic chappie!
I can't wait for the next one update soon! |
| Q20 2008-07-09 . chapter 9 Laura smiled as she got into the car. “It’s so good to be back with you, dear. I’ve missed you so much. And every boy needs his father.” She laughed a little wildly, and started the engine.
I don't trust Laura anymore. |
| luvnumb3rs 2008-07-04 . chapter 9 Interesting twist. Loved the whole chapter. I miss having Charlie. But your doing a great job. |
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