Amusing.

Definitely different. Well conceived and executed. I liked it very much. It was a pleasant read. No real flaws, I did not notice any grammar or spelling problems. Of course I was kind of busy reading to pay attention to that. :)

Hey again this is really good, but the bell just went, and I have to go, so it was really, really good.

That was very nice. I didn't think I'd enjoy an AU fic this much, but then, I'm reading for enlightenment, not enjoyment.
I like your writing style. Although, as Rhine pointed out, there are some grammar and spelling errors (homophones are the bane of spellchecks), they don't get in the way of the story. I like the way you kept and adapted the Eva aspects in the story, and I liked the story in general.
I don't think it needs a prequel, but if you write it, I'll be happy to read it.
And if you are saying what I think you are saying, I think you are right. Do you own a crystal ball?
Well, that's all from me this time. Great work!

Sorry about that, screwed up my last review. "Shinji deserves better?" Kinda like this website deserves better than dumbasses like you? You never cease to amaze me with your incredible stupidity, Cap-Gun-Boy. You've perfected retarded opinions to an art form. Bravo, dumbshit!

>Can't you ppl NOT use Asuka as Shinji's GF!?? I mean, COME ON!! She's a who just sucks!! Shinji DESERVES BETTER!!!

A very interesting read.

And who should be Shinji's Boyfriend, not like you could respond anyway.. ha i'm retarded.

Very well done. Please continue. I have to say this would work well as either an epilogue with proceeding chapters and/or the beginning of a new series. A similar work is Alain Gavels' "chosen".

Sigh!! Can't you ppl NOT use Asuka as Shinji's GF!?? I mean, COME ON!! She's a who just sucks!! Shinji DESERVES BETTER!!!

6/10 - Cap-Gun-Boy-Shinji-Fan
8/10 - Cap-The-Sensible

I like this fic very much. I personally feel that it kicks a$$ as-is, but if you want to expand it into a longer series, I won't complain at all. Write on.

You'll have to forgive my ignorance, but I think I need a better explanation of some of those spells. Particularly the ones where Toji saw Shinji, Asuka, and Rei in some compromising situations and the final part with Rei and Kowaru. I'm sure you explained it perfectly clear, but I managed to miss something important there. Anyway, from what I've gathered, this looks like a refreshing new twist on the series. I like it.

Keen. I have to say this is certainly one of the more intriguing Eva/fantasy stories. I liked Touji being more active in the fight, as well as Asuka and Shinji's more evolved relationship. Definitely enjoyed the idea of Sachiel and Ariel(Arael) having personalities, not to mention Zuriel's little appearance. The incorporation of the Eva's as armor was nicely done, although I was hoping for some reference to Bardiel (13th Angel) in Touji's armor. Also a little surprised to see no sign of most of the adult cast of Eva. A few grammatical errors sprinkled about (ing's dropped, couple subject-verb things, nothing glaring), and general OOC-ness on some parts. I like the story, but it feels kinda like SW:RotJ, the feeling that the story would be MUCH more complete if there were some chapters preceding it. (Hint hint ^_^) But even alone, the story is very good, and I hope you give us a few prequels. Keep up the good work!

this had to be one of the coolest AU eva fics i have ever read. Its well written, great story line, a mix of D&D and Warhammer fantasy. My hats off to you sir. And im looking forward to a sequal so do not dissapoint me good sir. Ill be looking forward to seeing more.

Pretty good fic with an interesting concept! I like it!!