Reviews for Brooklyn Bridges

Reviews For: Brooklyn Bridges

laplandgurl 2008-04-21 ch 3,	abuseI don't know how you do it - writing different stories at the same time - and you did so well with this chapter - sniff - sniff...how to explain death to kids...
Aphina 2008-04-20 ch 3,	abuseHey. I love this little companion piece, I enjoy seeing things from Gus's point of view and it's interesting to see how the chars have developed. The thing with Keiran was genuinely moving and i lvoed his reaction to Adam. His recation to his mom's attack was spot on too and it was fantastic that you explained why he was ashing out liek that.
Mauveine 2008-04-20 ch 3,	abuseI can't imagine having to tell a child that their parent has been injured, or worse, has died. You wrote it very well and I feel for all of them. Another great chapter.
Mauveine 2008-04-19 ch 2,	abuseWonderful start to what I am sure will be a beautiful story. It is a great piece to compliment Memories of Brooklyn. Looking forward to more.
Brown eyed Girl 75 2008-04-18 ch 2,	abuseYou already know how I feel and it is still a beautiful piece!
Aphina 2008-04-18 ch 1,	abuselol we're like one big hill billy family. We are all pretty incestuious!
laplandgurl 2008-04-18 ch 2,	abuseWow - another tear jerker - and yes you are doing justice to Brown Eye girls OCs - I know that I have said it before, but you are an awesome writer.
jayfray 2008-04-18 ch 2,	abuseThat complemented Memories of Brooklyn so well, I really can't wait to read the rest.
Aphina 2008-04-18 ch 2,	abuselol i gotta tell you, i was almost in tears with this piece. My heart was breaking for Adam, and Gus trying to comfort him.. Your imagery was potent and I really felt for them all. You do the story justice!
Forest Angel 2008-04-18 ch 2,	abuseI think this will make a good companion piece to Memories of Brooklyn. I like all the OCs you have both successfully brought together.

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