...good God that's dark. But extremely well written at the same time. Excellent work.

Don't think I finished reading the while thing but I know it was pretty good. I read Lord of the Night by Simon Spurrier and, other than being kinda vauge at times, I thought it was pretty good.

This is a great story! I write Warhammer 40,0 short stories (not online) and I often like to look at other short works to see how I can improve. This is probably the best or in the top three. Good job!

This was an interesting read, and I liked how its the Sisters of Battle and Night Lords compared to another loyal Astartes chapter like it usually is, of course I'm hypocritical there. The few things that I found rather...uncomfortable in the story was mainly the Sisters being named the Imperium's finest, now please tell me if I misread that, but the Sisters are by no means the Imperium's finest, as that title belongs to the Space Marines.

Other than that, there really isn't anything I saw thats a big deal, kudos to a good first story.