OMG OMG OMG OMG OMG OMG OMG TOTAL HEMOPHOB EW

Ok well theres the missing details to Breaking Dawn.

Hiya!! I found you!! I absolutely loved this story! Now u must write me a Jacob fic!!

Wow. I loved it! It was rather depressing, but almost frighteningly accurate, considering what happened in Breaking Dawn and how similar Edward's reactions are in this to in BD, although I'll presume you wrote this before BD came out, for which I commend you even more! It's so hard to stay in character, especially with Twilight, and especially with all of the crazy OOC fanfiction out there, but you did it perfectly!
I especially loved the sensual scenes, not just because of their content but because of how perfectly you portrayed Bella and Edward's love for each other and how you didn't make it easy for them-so many people just make it seem like they're been doing it for years and have absolutely no problems-which obviously they wouldn't.
I'll be running off and reading more of your stories once I finish my Chemistry homework.
Keep writing-you're amazing!

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Cool!

THE END?!?!

Ah.
Fine. Be that way.

No, seriously, that was AWESOME.
Although the part where Edward crushed Bella's hip was quite yucky. >.>

-K

THat was really really good. Sorry about not rewiewing...I like to review at the end of a story. I really liked this! Keep writing!!

I definitely liked the story. I would have enjoyed another chapter or two, but you have to end the story somewhere and there is as good as anywhere. I will definitely check up on both of your guys' stories. If they're anything like this one, I'm sure I'll love it. :)

Wonderful story! A great read, with just the right amount of angst, love and smut!

i love it. this is really a sweet happy ending. and a pretty awesome way bella was changed. lol. just imagine, theres a book, let's call it Twilight Volume 2 and they Bella tells someone the story she got changed... lol...
x
uemialice

THIS IS AWESOME!
Edward is so sweet...
I want an Edward, too!! (well.. i've got a boyfriend and i love him and all but edward's just a tad better. lol)
x
uemialice

omg! poor bella!! prro edward!! things really got out of hand, didn't they? oh well... on with the next chapter...
x
Alica

OMG! THAT IS AWESOME! ON WITH THE BEXT CHAPTER! NOW!

lol that was a funny reaction of bella... lol... fainting. but i guess everybody would faint when they were in bellas position, making love to THE EDWARD CULLEN.
lol
on with the next chapter...
x Alica