That fic was pretty good DD

Now I'm curious about the sequel I'm going to read that, then eheh

Kisses and till then

Rosetta

*Rolling around on the floor shrieking with lsughter*

Oh my blog, this makes "Retribution" even funnier!

*Whips out about a half dozen towels*

I volunteer for Dean Clean-Up Duty!

GREAT story yet again!

:D:D:D I love you! Seriously. :)

If there were any of your stories that I could see a movie version of, this one would be it. LOL

I LOVE all your stories, all of them, but there's just something about the humerous ones that really show off your writing skills. You're a genius at comedy!

And who doesn't enjoy the lift one gets from smiling so darn much... I smiled through the entire thing, along with the occasional snort of laughter.

What really stuck me was the mental image of Dean on the ground fighting the "cute" little Sprite. So so good! And Sam's impressive self control at not outright laughing is commendable. :D:D:D

Hilarous stuff... I owe you, I really do. Thanks for that. :)

Ha ha, loved the line about the lone sprite, sounding like a sad little orphan. Still laughing at that now!

Dean got slimed - brilliant

Wend x

“Fine, whatever. Dangerous ankle biting killing machines – got it.”

Oh, Dean so deserves the blue goo for not taking Sam's warnings seriously!

I LOVED this! Thank you so much for the dedication, it really made my day!

Great story, as always. I think this is going to be my new motto for life: "Neat people are just too lazy to look for things." LOL

Great description of the sprite too. You did a good job making it seem at first innocuous, and then a little creepy.

Such great lines in here: “Dude, there is seriously something wrong with you. I say it’s a nice day and you think possession? Maybe you need to take a few days vacation.” Sam was cracking me up with the "Christo." :) And: "I really don’t wanna end up with ‘death by sprite’ on my tombstone." Oh, and: “Dude, you make it sound like some sad little orphan wandering around. If we’re gonna kill something it should at least sound blood thirsty and vicious, otherwise we just come off like the bad guys.” And my favorite: “No, Dean, I think it’s a beaver with a bad hair day.” LOL I love the banter, you do it so well!

I was cracking up when Dean couldn't stand up cuz of all the goo. Why, oh why, is it always Dean covered with mud/goo/etc? Poor guy! And Sam...too bad he wasn't able to contain his mirth, or else he might not've ended up wandering around in an old woman's garden nearly naked. LOL

Thanks for the laugh!

hahahah OMG HUN

I LOVED THIS!

wow hun you really are great at anything you write x

LOVED IT to bits hun

you are just awesome hehe xx

THANK YOU!

I enjoyed the story and your right, just read "Retribution" afterwards and it all flows together.

I liked your reference to Sam being the organized one, we definitely saw that in "Mystery Spot".

Cute line, "...I think it's a beaver with a bad hair day."

Dean did complain afterwards about being slimed, but he did warn Sam away to protect him. Big brother mode was in full swing, always love that.

I liked the mystery and of course the smile at the end as Sam tried to not to laugh. The way I pictured Dean was from the pilot episode covered in blue slime instead of river mud.

Thanks for sharing another story with us.

Always look forward to them.

One last note - I wish this whole deal with Dean was resolved so you could have the brothers visit with Jean and Toby again, so they would know that the brothers are OK.

Until next time, take care.

That was so awesome and perfect on every level. I cracked up through the whole thing. _ I would love to have the level of self control Sam showed. I would've busted out laughing in Dean's face and had to deal with the consequences. Sorry Dean, you know I love ya, but it was hilarious. ;)

OMG - this was hysterical. Like a teletubbie attacking them. Thanks for such a good laugh.

Phoebe

OMG! Blue goo on Dean

awesome story

:D *hugs*

Superb hon, fantastic prequel to Retribution! Again you wrote the boys like you are one of the Supernatural writing team, you paint a picture so vivid and so real that it plays out in my mind as I read!

“Uh, Dean?” said Sam and Dean looked at him then followed his gaze downwards. He blinked.

“Oh, come on – seriously? That’s it?”

“No, Dean, I think it’s a beaver with a bad hair day.”

Beaver with a bad hair day, hysterical and so in character with their banter, even during a hunt!

Don't know how Sam kept a straight face when seeing his blue goo covered brother but self preservation probably took preference! And so typical Dean wrapping himself in a blanket to protect his 'baby' from the disgusting substance he was covered in! Yep, it was definitely going to be a long drive!

Another masterpiece from you Michaela, faultless writing, the perfect start to the weekend, reading this!

Poor Dean hehe :-)

Loved the prequel as much as the other story! Great job!