Wow! I love your writing. It's absolutely... er... lovely. XD Amazing, twisted and creative. 10069 is too good. Though I really love 6918/1896 as well. But this story just makes me go speechless. Can't wait for the next chapter~

Love it, love it. Your sense of dangerous and insane love is perfect. Update soon. And just for some thing funny check this out http://w. youtube. com /watch?v= YhOOIPwsJQE, hope i can leave that.

This story is so awesome! >< You really have a flair for writing and picking out all those right words. The mood is just right, isn't too rushed or too slow. I've really been looking forward to this third chapter(even though I'm reviewing chapter 2 for some reason) and I just hope that the fourth will come up soon :D

I never thought I'd like 10069 fanfiction but with your story I seemed to enjoy it now. I really love your style of writing. It's entirely unique and simple yet all the emotions you wanted the readers to feel are all intact. Absolutely beautiful. I hope to read more from you soon. :)

Gambatte~
-blueporing90

This fic is absolutely beautiful. I'm glad you continue it!

Another beautifully written chapter. I hope continue this story and Opheliac and basically all of your 10069 fics. There needs to be more of this couple! They are so smexy together. :)

Wonderful chapter! I thought you have long forgotten this lovely dark story.

For the first time, I read enjoy comparisons made in a story. Normally, I will just be "baff..." well, surprisingly, I am totally in love with the metaphors and comparisons you made. Bravo.

Love these two and am looking forward to see more of them! We need more of this pairing! They are so smexy together!

Please continue; it's so beautiful, I can't wait. >.,<

oh, man... u write the one of the most beautiful 10069 stories ever. i really like yr story n hope 2 read more soon. 10069 is one of my fav. pairings in khr...pity very little ppl write good fics 'bout it... :)

I LOVE IT, absolutely love it. I like the idea of Rapunzel too oh dear love for you! you better continue the story!

“Will you sing me a song, my beautiful Rapunzel?”

Good story you wrote, one of the best of this parings I found actually. But I didn´t get the from down three up sentence with the weird langued, is it latin?If so you should have wrote a translation later. However it quite sad that it´s so little 10069, I want more! please uppdate as fast as you can, I coulden´t help but notice that you haven´t updated since 2008-04-20.

when are you going to post up chapter3?
I really, really enjoy your story.
No one writes ByakuranMukuro fics here except you!
...lovely story.

Before comment: To, M.E.
ㅠ 10069 is major!! (in Jp, Kr)

Dear Chesier Cat

ㅠㅠI really love ur fanfic!
I am always reading ur new fanfic> ㅁ

omg! ur fic is beautiful!

and all the more so becoz it's 10069 =D

Hey, I really like this story, and I hope you update the next chapter quickly.
Though it would be really twisted and amusing if Byakuran gets to be on top.
Does this story takes places after the battle between the two?