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Reviews for: An Untainted Consort of Tempest: Prologue
Crimson Primrose
2008-05-24 . chapter 1
Wow. This is certainly intriguing.
I'm liking how you're working the behind-the-curtain angle, it adds alot of mysteriousness to something we think we already know. I had a feeling 'dispose' was going to be thrown out as an option. *sniffle* How cruel..

Props for a very good read so far!
Suzume the Wanderer
2008-05-03 . chapter 1
That was very interesting, Ina-chan. I'm sorry that I'm never a very great reviewer, but I still wanted to express my opinions. The Bride of Tempest is quite mysterious. I look forward to reading what about your opinions on Harmonian politics and policy since I get so sick of hearing my own thoughts bounce around my head on those matters. New ideas are a breath of fresh air!
As I believe I mentioned previously, in a review for one of your other stories, I like Yohan. I think he's a good choice to center the story around.
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