Mrs.Margera092879 2008-09-03 . chapter 6aw that was a really cute chapter and the story is great so far 2 of my fav wrestlers. keep up the good work and please update soon |
WrestlingChicka 2008-08-24 . chapter 6All of these were so awesome! I love this pairing! I can't wait for the next update! |
dj-ssdd 2008-07-10 . chapter 6i love it. i love the philxjeff pairing. keep up the great work |
Speeding-Kitty 2008-07-08 . chapter 6Mushy! *giggles* Love it. Jeff suck a pain but adorable to hehe. There needs to be more Phil/Jeff in the world lol. Then again i think there should just be more wwe slash in the world to so lol. Cant wait to see what happens next. ^^ |
Super T 2008-07-07 . chapter 6Aw...what a cute chapter! Seriously, it was so sweet and I really enjoyed it. Punk and Jeffy...just too cute together. I'm with Punk, I don't like the rides that much either. The haunted houses were always my favorite part. But I was never scared either...just like Jeff. Haha. He was too scared, he just didn't want to admit it. I liked that part--it added a nice touch :)
Jeff's got quite an appetite, doesn't he? I really thought you did a great job talking about Punk and Jeff's relationship. I could really tell how much Punk cares about Jeff. It was just adorable. Damn--now you got me wishing this was real :) LOL.
Aw, Punk won a tiger for Jeff! That was sweet. I was always good at that balloon game too. But I think the best part of the whole chapter, and probably my favorite, was when Punk sent Jeff away so that he could get that ring for him. "Forever and Always"...AW! And it was so nice of the dude to let Punk have the ring for free.
So is this the end? If it is, I really really enjoyed this series, and I'm kinda sad to see it come to an end. You've really done an awesome job with it and I can't wait to see what else you have in store.
Love ya girl. This was awesome.
Tina |
Super T 2008-07-07 . chapter 5Hey girl!
Sorry I haven't been on for a few days. Hopefully we can talk soon. Anyway, awesome chapter! I love Jeffy and Punk together and this was such a cute chapter. That Jeff is quite a mischevious little devil, isn't he? But that's why Punk loves him. Even if they could possibly get kicked out because Jeff spent the rent money on paint...it's just impossible for Punk to stay mad at him.
Oh, Punk and Jeff at the carnival! Sounds VERY interesting. I love this series, and I'm going to be sad when it comes to an end. You're doing such a good job and I loved this chapter! Can't wait for chapter 6!
Love ya girl!
Tina |
AnonymousPunk 2008-07-07 . chapter 6Very cute :) |
JNHwwe 2008-07-06 . chapter 6*BIG PUPPY DOG TEARY EYS* OMG THAT WAS SO CUTE! please update asap X much luv X |
JNHwwe 2008-05-25 . chapter 4OMG LOVE IT! PLEASE KEEP IT UP :D x MUCH LUV x |
KBS25 2008-05-24 . chapter 4 Love it great chapter can't wait for more! update soon! |
Super T 2008-05-24 . chapter 3Hi again :)
Jeff's adorable in this. I love the way he talks and I laughed again while reading this. "Naw, you ain't gotta shave yet till ya got a Santy Claus beard." I can see Punk with a big beard like that, LOL. It would be too funny!
Aw, Jeff's a sucker for puppies! That's so cute that Punk bought one for him. Their relationship is moving along quite nicely and I can't wait to see what happens as it moves further. I loved the scene too when Punk was brushing Jeff's hair. I could see Jeff pouting because his hair is all messy and tangled.
Loved this!
Tina |
Super T 2008-05-24 . chapter 2Hey, it's me again :)
I laughed a lot while I was reading this. It was just too hilarious to imagine Punk and Jeff arguing over boxers. I can see Punk in Spongebob ones, and I just started laughing when I read it. Oh, Punk having wet dreams about Jeff? Can't say I blame him :) I love these two together. They are so cute.
You write Jeff better than anyone I know, I think. I could hear him speaking as I read this, and it was great. I love how he was acting like a little kid when they went to the mall. Punk's definitely got his hands full.
Love ya girlie!
Tina |
Super T 2008-05-24 . chapter 1Hey Kit Kat!
I really enjoyed this chapter. Punk and Jeff would be such a cute couple and it's interesting to see them paired up in fics, because you don't see that very often. They are actually probably a lot alike. I think you did a good job with this chapter and also with building up Punk's feelings for Jeff.
I feel bad for Punk...I definitely wouldn't want to be the one to round the guys up after a wild night of partying and take them home. Although I wouldn't have minded seeing Jericho dancing half-naked on the stripper pole, hee hee!
Great job girlie! I love ya!
Tina |
AnonymousPunk 2008-05-24 . chapter 4Good update. |
Super T 2008-05-24 . chapter 4Hey Kit Kat!
Girl, you are an awesome writer. I'm sorry I didn't review the other three chapters, but I am going to as soon as I finish this review. Anyway, I really really liked this chapter. It was cute :) I think it is so cute that Jeff calls CM Punk "Philly." How sweet!
Poor Jeff. You have to feel sorry for the guy, knowing that he lost everything he owned in the fire. What's even sadder is the fact that he lost both his puppies. I noticed that you named one of them Xena after your dog. I remembered that and was thinking about how upset you would be if you lost her. I can't imagine what it would be like to lose everything, but Punk will be able to help Jeff cope! You did such a great job, from describing Jeff's feelings, to showing how much Punk loved him.
I love ya girly and cannot wait for the next chapter!
Tina |