 Twilight's Blade 2009-12-17 . chapter 8Yo!
Thanks for the shout out! :D
I think the interaction plating out between Light and Kallen is very accurately in character. She would very well suggest inviting a "kindred spirit" into the Black Knights, and of course, manipulation through love is one of Light's most prominent tactics. I agree too that Lelouch wouldn't be interested in C.C. because she wasn't even human. I can't believe I hadn't thought about the fact C.C. might be carrying something.
Aww~ I didn't wanna think on of my favorite characters might be a slut. :C
One thing I'm not sure of is the ending of this chapter. I think this story might have lost my willing suspension of belief with the article tribute online. Don't worry, I like it way too much to just stop here, but...well there's a -chance- that her death would still be recognized even after Charles' infamous "What of it?" attitude, but Lelouch and Nunnally's name wouldn't be mentioned at all. Correct me if I'm wrong, but Lelouch renounced his title to the throne when nothing was done about his mother or his injured sister. And if none of common Britannians knows Lelouch and Nunnally were royalty and the higher ups wanted to keep it that way, then there's no way they would post there names on the internet. At the very least of it all, I personally think it makes Light's job way too easy. :D
So my question is, where are you going with your story? I'm curious!
But yeah...just something I thought I should point out there...
~TB |
 Namiko Shigemoto 2009-12-14 . chapter 8OMGOMGOMG! >/< KALLEN/LIGHT! it's so cute...but it's so true it would be cuter if Light wasn't such a bastard in the inside. XDD
LELOUCH AND LIGHT FIGHT TIME! yeah! pure awesomeness. Love the way how you made Lelouch go like..."WTF? LIGHT? DATING KALLEN? WTF?!"
must update soon, aye? |
 HarunaNiwa073 2009-12-13 . chapter 8wow... this sure is interesting and exciting... (no sarcasm intended...)
Lelouch vs. Light is really... intriguing |
 Magical Poof 2009-12-10 . chapter 8I was a bit wary of how well a Death Note/Code Geass crossover would work, but this turned out amazing! I love it! The characterization was spot-on and I enjoyed the interactions between all the characters-- though I'm a bit biased and would have liked to see Lelouch come out on top more. I'm curious as to what Ryuk would see over C.C.'s head. I mean, he can see her name and her life span... Which would be... what? Zero, since she's technically already dead? XD
I'm looking forward to the next chapter and can't wait to see more of L infiltrating the Black Knights. Oh, and I'm glad this isn't yaoi, since I'm not a big fan of it and it's so hard to find good het/gen fics. |
 Zero Tribal 2009-12-10 . chapter 8This story is simply TOO amazing for words! So much epic pwnage...I starve to read more. I can't believe I didn't see Mao being the one who died XD It makes sense...
LightxLelouch...awesomeness. Code Geass is the love child of Death Note and Gundam (or some other mecha thing) anyway, so why not? XD Ah, the thing with Shirley and the "Lelouch...you 're gay?" had me in stitches! 8D
Flamazing~ Keep it up! |
 FF, Inc 2009-12-10 . chapter 5 Like the plot so far, but not a big fan of yaoi...I suppose the current yaoi level is bearable. |
 chaos-winged-valkryrie 2009-12-05 . chapter 8Wow I can't believe I've not noticed the new chapter in a while. orz -fail-
Anyway, an excellent chapter as always.
And I see that Light has figured out Lelouch's secret? Hmm well that makes things a lot more interesting! I look forward to the next chapter!
Keep up the excellent work!
-cwv |
 Bolinoak 2009-12-04 . chapter 8Oh anju-chan, I'm hurt that you would not pass this by me.
Well not really, it's your story, not mine so you have every right to do what you want with it. Besides this time it seems like you did not need me.
Well I liked this chapter a lot, mostly for the L/C.C. interaction in the beginning. You have a good grasp of those two.
I really don't have much else to say because how nicely this chapter flowed. I think you're improving greatly without me anju-chan. Although I still like being your beta... |
 Taliath 2009-11-30 . chapter 8Heh. Fascinating. Keep it up. |
 Tetsukon 2009-11-29 . chapter 8Well that was a bit of an anti climactic way to find out Lelouch's secret, if not the most realistic. It's going to be hard for him to keep the rest of them at this rate, knowing that if Light does join the black knights. He'd probably see C.C. floating around. Though I suppose Lelouch could just use geass on him. He'd lose a big advantage though.
Great chapter. Always look forward to your work! |
 Mizu1411 2009-11-29 . chapter 8Amazing story :D |
 Peanuckle 2009-11-28 . chapter 8Oh snap, Light has the upper hand now. Not only does he have an in to the BK, but he knows Lelouch's real identity. I imagine that getting into the BK and seeing Zero with C.C. will tip him off about that too.
It's looking like Lelouch is outmatched here. L could be his only defense against Kira, should Light decide to remove Zero. On the other hand, I think that a Zero/Kira partnership could be interesting. Zero's intelligence network would let Kira get at the nobles who hid their names, and Kira could remove a lot of Zero's problems in return.
I eagerly await your next update. |
 OlivineWK 2009-11-27 . chapter 8Light, you heartless bastard. :P I'm not really partial to Kallen, but I do feel sorry for her, being played like that and all.
Light always (or most of the time) seems to have the upper hand. It's pretty funny actually, because of the little rivalry that Lelouch and Light have. |
 SlvrSoleAlchmst1 2009-11-27 . chapter 8Bad news for you on the review front. I can't type much. I haven't got my ergonomically correct keyboard OR my wrist wraps. My laptop keyboard and mouse... they're killers, and I've already had to type up a bunch of shit for homework. If I type too much more, I'll die. So this is going to be SHORT. *rubs wrists*
“Normal doesn’t grant greatness.” Amen, and this scene rocks.
No, Zero! Don't trust Kallen THIS time!
I must say, I feel Rivalz's pain. *Suzaku-mode* EVERYONE HATES IT WHEN YOU BRUSH THEM OFF, LELOUCH!
"Light? ... -Light?- ... -Light?!- ... -LIGHT?!- ... Lelouch fled." Best example of something dawning on Lelouch EVER, that.
AUGH. SHIRLEY ANGST.
C.C. IS hot. *cough* And "glass-gold eyes?!" *dies*
Light's getting chips? *snort* We all know what that means.
*choke-sigh* Light's going to let Suzaku live. Whew.
Cornelia's knights? No! Light, you bastard.
DAMN IT, YAGAMI. |
 The Blizzard Alchemist 2009-11-26 . chapter 8Sorry for missing my usual review for every chapter. I didn't want to have a "no, my shiping!" (btw KallenxLulu...and now I'm a fanboy)
I'm not a huge fan of KallenxLight, but I can see how it serves as a vehicle to bring Light in contact with the Black Knights.
I enjoyed L's interactions with C.C., as well as that little pun (R.R.)
I do love the twist at the end. I've always wondered why no one in canon guessed "Hey, these two Brittanian children in Japan by the name of Lelouch and Nunnally...they look/are the same age/live in the same country as those members of royalty"
I'll be sending my predictions through PM, in case I get another random guess right :] |