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god of stuff
2009-10-22 . chapter 6
Very interesting so far.
DragonTyrion
2009-09-01 . chapter 6
Very nice. I look forward to reading more.
Jonakhensu
2009-08-23 . chapter 6
This is the best Cassie-centric fic I've read so far. It's also one of the only well written Ranma/Star Gate crossovers that isn't a multi-cross that I haveread. Keep up the great work. I can't wait to see how they're going to explain everything to Ranma. And psychokinetic Cassie is just perfect. I hope she gets to keep it.
YuriFan5
2009-08-21 . chapter 4
I guess I shouldn't be complaining about this, since all thoughts of "making sense" go out the window when SG1 is involved. However, there is a rather large plot hole of a language barrier between a young Japanese boy and two Americans. Although I guess that the NID could have taught him English, since it would be a pain in the ass to constantly have someone translate for him.
Wrin
2009-08-16 . chapter 6
Interesting. I hope you decide to continue some time soon.
Bobboky
2009-07-28 . chapter 6
very good work
Moriko_Nightdream
2009-07-20 . chapter 6
lol, poor SGC, now they're stuck with the chaos that is Ranma
^-^
alex jones
2009-07-11 . chapter 6
This has the potential to be a very good Ranma/Stargate cross.
I really like the way Teal'c handled Ranma (poor poor Jafa).
a
2009-07-08 . chapter 6
Wow. Interesting choice of story path. Ranma's now aware of the Stargate and Cassandra's a telekinetic.

Human interaction is probably the best part of the story. Characterization is excellent and highly believalble, for all the characters, except Nirrti. She seemed way too patient.

Very good story. Looking forward to more.
Firehedgehog
2009-07-03 . chapter 6
smirks.. love it
SHAWNPROVONCHA
2009-07-02 . chapter 6
THIS IS A GREAT STORY,SO PLEASE KEEP UP THE GREAT WORK.
ManaSword2567451
2009-06-26 . chapter 6
What a great chapter. This was a very good update to an already good story. I can't wait until the next part cause of the cliffhanger that you left it at. Hope to see more soon.

Mana_Sword
Blackdex
2009-06-26 . chapter 6
please continue. ciao
FantomoDrako
2009-06-25 . chapter 6
Wow. Pure wow.

I have only one complaint - the line where Cassie falls on Ranma after they went through the Stargate. You have two 'gently's and a 'gentle' in that line and it sounds really weird when you read it.

I'm not trying to be mean, simply pointing something out.

Yeesh, how many pages was this chapter? 50? Still, I thoroughly enjoyed every second of it!

Another wonderful job, to you and your beta, and I can't wait for the next chapter! (I'm not expecting you to update quickly though after such a huge update.)

Until next time,

~Fantomo
hittocerebattosai
2009-06-24 . chapter 6
*pets Ranma and Cassie* Oh dear, poor babies. *dotes on them*

Thank you for the update~ ^^ It was really neat. *grin* I will be looking forward to seeing the next chapter~ ^^ *grin*
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