Lol! I'll have to find that tape on youtube now~

Very cute and humorous ^^

'Ello there. ^^ A review as requested.

I liked this story. Your goal was to make it like a roller coaster ride, right? Well it worked, although I can't say that it was easy to consider the "downs" seriously, just because the "ups" were right around the corner. In other words, it worked very well for humor (and making poor Ryou feel awkward), but not so much for drama.

Nicely varied sentences. Good language command, and very good descriptions of Ichigo. I'll nitpick a few lines for you:

"He asked his-self" Don't think this is accurate; try "himself."

"After several minutes later…" Technically this is a redundancy. "After" isn't necessary, because "later" conveys the same thing. Cutting that just gets rid of some of the "fat" in the writing.

"He never actually had wanted to make anyone laugh before, or has ever really had a reason." Switched into present tense for a word here. Slightly tricky, but "has" should be "had."

"They were red with sadness, which were embedded with dark chocolate orbs." Now this one is tricky too, but technically if you say it this way you're telling us that "sadnesses" were embedded with the orbs. Watch out for this kind of thing.

M...one other minor thing I could mention is the use of elipses. The ones not in dialogue weren't really necessary, but they're actually personal preference and could be part of your "style" as an author. It just bothers some people.

Now for a few of the lines I loved:

"He smiled inside at his genius-ness." No explanation needed.

"I didn’t even cry when they took off Sex and the City, and so do you REALLY think I’m going to cry now?" Made me laugh out loud, even though I'm not sure they have Sex and the City in Japan. xD

"He narrowed his eyebrows to show he was being serious and not funny—or sarcastic—or annoying—or scary—or mean." This was really good, because, as I'm sure you know, it sums up the entire story and sort of "casts off" the things he tried. The hyphens are unconventional and a bit iffy, but the impact is still there.

As for character, I think this was believable. Looking back, it must have been really hard for Ichigo to keep up the act during all that insulting; she must have been really determined. xD I loved seeing each side of Ryou as well. Just be careful with him - he's gotta have *just* enough emotion in him to be human (and sufficiently embarassed about it later), but not so much as to make him...un-Ryou-ish. The tear, for instance, might have been too much. A lot depends on how deep his feelings extended for Ichigo before the oneshot started, though.

All and all, an enjoyable read - keep it up. ^^

That was soo cute.. I wanna see it on youtube!
AHAHAHA!!
Lilly

Oh my God, that was hilarious! I thought there was something wrong with her, but then the ending was just too cute! X3

XDD That was hilarious! The entire time I thought, "What the Hell did Ryou say!?" For a few seconds I thought that Ryou said that Masaya was dead, but nope. I wouldn't cry about that. XD

I'm sorry to say that my eyes were a little skittish during this oneshot. I glanced at the bottom line once and I thought that Ichigo put a dummy of herself on Ryou's bedroom floor and hid a camera in his room.

Oh, jeez, I would've LOVED to see Ryou's expression. I was thinking that Ryou would say, "Well, it seems as if I can't make you feel better..." Then he'd get up to change in the middle of the room. "...But I do have to go to sleep." That would've shook Ichigo! XD It would've shook me, too, but I'd be staring at him. >:3 I love this oneshot, Kittieneechan!

-M-12

AHAHAH Go Ichigo!

Wha Wah Wah Wahn Wah.

Ha Ha! I loved it!

lol that was really hilarious. i did that to my sister's once. i was at my friends house and her mom 'sent' us to our room. i took the cat sprayer so it looked like i had tears in my eyes and they thought i was actually crying!XD

I have to admit, the end part made me laugh! How could she sit and make herself cry?

The paragraphs are quite nicely long and the description is very effective. You can change the mood of the story easily and the bet part is that it all works out. I felt tension, worry, embarrassment on Ryou's behalf (telling jokes is probably the last thing I'd resort to, for some reason) and the ending was pretty funny!

My friend did this to me once, so I know how Ryou feels. His desperation also came through in the story. I liked this! And what's more, you seem to have gotten a bit better than the last thing you posted (if that's possible)...

KO xoxo

That was such a remarkable twist! Awesome!

"£$"£%£$*! I DID NOT SEE THAT COMING! o_o xD I thought calling her stupid couldn't of gotten her! The jokes WERE NOT funny. xD Specially the chicken. I don't get it (does not have a low IQ).

That was great! You have to write more. Please! Very good.

loved it, I could sort of see that coming. Good fic Ryou actually reverted to telling jokes, so funny

peace, love, and lemons

Poor Ryou! ^o^ Can I see this youtube video?? (seriously!!)
So, the Strawberry Girl CAN be crafty... I think the part when he was trying out all those names on her will definitely be the highlight of the tape. :) Keep Writing!