Wow. I really enjoyed that chapter quite a bit. What happened to the rest of it?

Makokam out.

Great chapter. I really felt bad for Impa when her mother told her her love had been given to someone else, and again when she had to carry the tray for her mother right past him.

And you great job on the whole angry running of to the mountain thing. That scene was very well done and really captured the angst teenager in a believable way (even if she is only twelve.)

Looking forward to the next chapter.

Very well written and intricate. I've never seen a story that gives so much attention to Impa's back story. You even went so far as to create a history for the origins of the Sheikah.

I like how you developed an entire culture for them, and how you've woven Impa's life in with that. She has a very interesting personality.

And the relationship she has with her mother is quite beautiful. You expertly portrayed a mothers love for her child, and vice versa.

You really made me feel sorry for her though, having her mate chosen for her can't be a pleasant thing.