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LOVE IT! UPDATE UPDATE UPDATE UPDATE! =)

hopefully u r making another chapter... : ) I can't wait

Jacob is funny how blind is he? hello... engaged here

Write more! :)

AWESOME! =)

I like your story so far, but I think that you have Jacob's view wrong. I honestly don't think he would ever think of kidnapping Bella. Also there are a few sentences i had to re-read because they didn't make sense and some spelling errors, but other than that I love your story and Ypu should continue.

P.S) You said this was Edward's point of view of Twilight? Or is it the 4th book? Anyways P.M me if you have any qs. My mom has a story on here and it's pretty good. Her name is sunshineanddiamonds