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| MissInvisible 2008-04-18 ch 1, | abuseVery nice one-shot, I really liked how you used Roxas and Namine as Nobodies and made them phase in and out of Sora and Kairi. :] The flow is pretty good too, and the last paragraph to sum it all up. Aw, now I feel bad for Axel after you brought him up, lol. ttyl! -MissInvisible |