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| Writer's-BlockDP 2008-06-13 ch 2, anon. | abuseOoh... coolio idea! This really would be a great one to continue. So... they're engaged but neither knows the details about the other's job? And he didn't connect with her last name being Manson - does he even know it? So many questions... *sigh* I seriously love your writing; it totally rocks! |
| goldacharmed 2008-05-19 ch 2,  | abuseoh what a cite story, i loved it, once again it was written beautifully. just like a professional would do it. i wonder if you know how good you are, later dude. |
| goldacharmed 2008-05-19 ch 1, | abusewow, that was the coolest thing i have read in a long time. you have a great imagination, and you know how to write it out so well too. nice job, on to the next. |
| Black January 2008-05-02 ch 2, | abuseLove it! You should definitely right a story on that! It reminds me of that movie Mr. and Mrs. Smith. Loved it loved it loved it!jpg |
| Soului 2008-05-02 ch 2, | abuseHmm, so it's a Mrs. and Mr. Smith type thing. Very nice, I like it! |
| Devilchild93 2008-05-02 ch 1, | abuseThis is good,it should definately become a full story |
| goth.one 2008-04-20 ch 1, | abuseWow! I mean, I'm not usually into stuff that's so AU, but this was really cool! Maybe you could involve some time travel or something! Yay Clockwork! Anyways, it's all up to you, but great job! And you should definitely continue this one! Thank you! -chris |
| Soului 2008-04-18 ch 1, | abuseAn excellent Au story, I can't wait for the actual thing. Very nice and I await futher chapters with interest. I can't think of any concrit to say. |
| 2wingo 2008-04-18 ch 1, | abuseWow. I was contemplating writing a futuristic DP pic myself. This is extremely close to the ideas I had. I hope, in light of that fact, that it's not biased to say that this is TOTALLY AWESOME! |