0h God! Heart touching... -goes to cry-

Firstly before i say anything else, spelling Gryffindor as Gryphendor was a fairly shocking mistake, and did not get things off to a good start.

However, your writting is good, powerful and full of emotion.

The energy and emotion woven into you story makes it worth reading.

I did NOT notice that angst was one of the categories. Was not expecting that. It was really, really, really sweet though, and I loved the abrupt shift from we-were-in-love to suicide note. Fantastic job, and it was very realistic, too.

Ah, I love angst. Great job :3

there is only one thing i hate about this story... it's way too SHORT! i absolutely loved your style. Since it's hard to find a good AS/S fan fiction people like you should write more! And 6 reviews c'mon people! after thinking about how many reviews that "My Immortal" shit got im really angry! i guess i overreacted a bit:P whatever im so gonna check your other stories:D and add you as my favorite Author:D

This is really well written. I LOVE IT! I didn't expect it to be a character death from the beginning, but after a while the feeling was there and the fact that they were only in 4th year is really depressing.

Best everest. Pretty sad, but I saw the category "angst" and didnt expect anything else. I liked Albus straightforward style very much.

S.

Nice... Very Romeo and Juliet. But I think, in the depths of my heart that if someone had put an end to Scorpius life, Albus would hunt them down to the end of the world before letting go. Maybe because of his blood, or his name-sakes. He doesn't strike me as someone who go down without a fight or without good old-fashioned revenge.

:-P super depressing, but still really well written! i like the way you described scorpius.

omg! suicide note,

never saw that coming

it's very sad

but the end has a little hint of humor

me likey :)

First off some nit-picky things:

-Gryffindor is spelled wrong.

-The last half of your story is in Italics.

On to my review:

-Interesting plot...but it seemed like it was missing something inbetween 14 and now (at the apartment).

-It had a good voice and makes me want to read more.

MathChick