It was short and sweet but don't keep it a oneshot! I really liked it!

Don't let it just be an oneshot let it flow with the memories!
Update it, and maybe double check it!
MG#6

Heh! I like it!
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It helps, when your speaking/writing in Al Bhed, that you make the translation clear, like put in italics, something like that!

I like stories where Rikku ends up pregnant! Cause it leaves sort of something for Rikku, after 'the love of her life' well 'leaves'!
It's sort of complicated how that works hey? Cause on all accounts, Rikku should of gotten pregnant earlier if both Auron and Rikku were able to "make babies". But what I believe is that the child should not be able to survive or should at least have serious health issues due to the fact that Auron is an Unsent causing the kid to be Half-unsent/dead and half alive which is sort of wrong.. (not wrong as in eww wrong, wrong as in that's not meant to happen)
But, don't get me wrong, as I said I love stories where Rikku is left pregnant!

About you story... I like it!
You probably could turn this short (if that's what it is) into a full blown story where Rikku is off to live with Yuna (is this an AU? or does Auron get sent in this story aswell?) has her baby and looks for Auron... as Yuna looks for Tidus in FFX-2, give Rikku a lead... Something!
But this story is doing great as a Short!

Umm what else..?? .. .. .. .. .. I love your stories!

Oh, smexy. I want more!