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| ZoeGiggleFrizzle 2008-05-15 ch 8, | abuseNow I'm really excited. I wish there were more stories like this. Update! |
| SPEEEEEEEAK 2008-05-15 ch 8, | abuseaugh! too short! please keep writing! i hope everything works out for Angel... good job! |
| SPEEEEEEEAK 2008-05-02 ch 7, | abusegood job. continue. some editing mistakes but everyone has those. =] |
| SPEEEEEEEAK 2008-04-26 ch 6, | abuseaww... that's so sweet. continue! =] |
| ZoeGiggleFrizzle 2008-04-25 ch 5, | abuseThis is pretty cool. Can't wait to read more. |
| broadwaybaby4205 2008-04-20 ch 3, | abuse“#007861 (Zaishiya Schunard) HUMAN ADDAPTATIONS JOURNAL” was written on the first page. I skimmed through the pages until I saw today’s day. “Humans cannot use magic to open car doors, must use metal scrap” was written in curvy handwriting. “Magic?” I whispered to myself. Then I thought about what had happened. The girl, the car, the notebook she was writing in. I looked down at the book. “Angel is magic?!” Huh? |
| broadwaybaby4205 2008-04-20 ch 2, | abuseLoving this! :) Great job! :) |
| broadwaybaby4205 2008-04-20 ch 1, | abuseThis is gonna be good! I can't wait to read the next chappie! :) |
| SPEEEEEEEAK 2008-04-20 ch 4, | abuseooh. mysterious. Angel's taking them back to her world? should be interesting. =] |
| ZoeGiggleFrizzle 2008-04-20 ch 4, | abuseOMG! They tied her up? Anways, good chapter. It keeps getting better and better. |
| SPEEEEEEEAK 2008-04-19 ch 3, | abuseheehee. now what will Mark do with this newfound knowledge? |
| SPEEEEEEEAK 2008-04-19 ch 2, | abusethat was good. please continue. ok..so Mimi and Angel have magic powers?! hmm... and one question on the first chapter. Roger had the keys in his hand. how did they then get locked in the car? just wondering. =] |
| ZoeGiggleFrizzle 2008-04-19 ch 2, | abuseI haven't read anything like this before. Can't wait to see what happens. Update soon! |
| ConfusedColumbia26220 2008-04-18 ch 2, | abuseUm. . .confusing. . .what's this leading to? |
| ZoeGiggleFrizzle 2008-04-18 ch 1, | abuseThis is very interesting. I like all of your stories. |