Hmmm. Well. I liked Ruina. Didn't like the new laws she forced. I preferred the Jasper ending to the Edward ending. But, that's cause I really don't like Edward. I had to read it though (the alternate ending, that is) because ... well, cause you did it! I had to see how it would come about. I enjoyed the whole of the stories very much.

:( Nooo! Grrr, That was so nice..You lead me on..I thought it would be JXB! :'( What a sad ending..For no reason, it almost made me well, Who , Good enough.

CONGRATZ!YOU HAVE JUST FINISHED YOUR STORY! And I love was a good plot, But you couldve just told us in the first place. ' Who cares(Well, It might be just me who doesnt..) if that would ruin the suprise! :P Although Id prefer have it my style, (Jxb) I kinda thought it would lead to Exb so thats why I read making stories like these and I would comment on it all...Im spamming, Arent I? Gahwd.I must have sniffed a sharpie...I think, I mean, I know this story will get more revi-Im you cant see, Youre probably getting just gonna cut this short and-BYE! A.P

P.S I like your story.

P.P.S (OH NOT ANOTHER ONE!) This is probably the longest review youve sorry.-THE ONE AND ONLY A.P!

That's nice...but I'm more of a Js/B fan, myself but it was written nicely. I liked how Jasper's like, "When are you going to get YOURS (happy ending]?"

And I liked how Bella scared them. I could picture her leaning on her elbow, siting pretty in her throne and she rolls her eyes and says, "I've heard enough...[off with his head!]"

hm, it was good, but im still a bigger fan of jasper :) hehe... but still, your a teriffic witer!

amor,

Alyssa

AW! I LOVED IT!

Hey. I mean I love he whole Jasper thing but I really love edward. It's so hard to choose bu awesome story! :-)

Oh yes! This was the way it should have ended.. hehe

I like Jasper, but he isn't meant for Bella, they are both to mellow.. LOL

Great writing..

Sigh...that's better! I did like the Jasper ending, but this just feels..."Right"...

:-)

This is how Ruina should have ended !

Love your writing. U are so talented...

i like the jasper ending better

Well I like this ending better... I wish I had been into reading fanfiction when you started "Ruina" so I could've voted for Edward! Although I understand the pain, MOST problems can be worked though if we let them. I think it's hard on younger people (yes, I'm OLD, too old but anyway...) to accept that you have to work through your problems. No relationship is or will be perfect - it's a compromise.

Thanks for sharing your story & doing the alt ending!

ah good ending! i was so mad when she cjose jasper but now i'm happy :) good job

now that's a real ending!

i love ito

please keep the fics coming..i love your writings

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This was a beautiful story, and Just Us is the right ending to it. That's just the way it should be. :)

Very good!