|Reviews for Just Us|
| TwistedNeiviv 11/20/11 . chapter 1
Hmmm. Well. I liked Ruina. Didn't like the new laws she forced. I preferred the Jasper ending to the Edward ending. But, that's cause I really don't like Edward. I had to read it though (the alternate ending, that is) because ... well, cause you did it! I had to see how it would come about. I enjoyed the whole of the stories very much.
| Anonymous.Peace 8/13/11 . chapter 1
:( Nooo! Grrr, That was so nice..You lead me on..I thought it would be JXB! :'( What a sad ending..For no reason, it almost made me well, Who , Good enough.
CONGRATZ!YOU HAVE JUST FINISHED YOUR STORY! And I love was a good plot, But you couldve just told us in the first place. ' Who cares(Well, It might be just me who doesnt..) if that would ruin the suprise! :P Although Id prefer have it my style, (Jxb) I kinda thought it would lead to Exb so thats why I read making stories like these and I would comment on it all...Im spamming, Arent I? Gahwd.I must have sniffed a sharpie...I think, I mean, I know this story will get more revi-Im you cant see, Youre probably getting just gonna cut this short and-BYE! A.P
P.S I like your story.
P.P.S (OH NOT ANOTHER ONE!) This is probably the longest review youve sorry.-THE ONE AND ONLY A.P!
| treena-ivy-carter 6/17/11 . chapter 1
That's nice...but I'm more of a Js/B fan, myself but it was written nicely. I liked how Jasper's like, "When are you going to get YOURS (happy ending]?"
And I liked how Bella scared them. I could picture her leaning on her elbow, siting pretty in her throne and she rolls her eyes and says, "I've heard enough...[off with his head!]"
| PhyscoxXxPixie 10/25/10 . chapter 1
hm, it was good, but im still a bigger fan of jasper :) hehe... but still, your a teriffic witer!
| twilight4evr84 11/14/09 . chapter 1
AW! I LOVED IT!
| ILoveVampires96 7/10/09 . chapter 1
Hey. I mean I love he whole Jasper thing but I really love edward. It's so hard to choose bu awesome story! :-)
| Twilight Addict Brenda 6/23/09 . chapter 1
Oh yes! This was the way it should have ended.. hehe
I like Jasper, but he isn't meant for Bella, they are both to mellow.. LOL
| sydneytwilightmum 5/29/09 . chapter 1
Sigh...that's better! I did like the Jasper ending, but this just feels..."Right"...
| Jennie T Cullen 5/19/09 . chapter 1
This is how Ruina should have ended !
Love your writing. U are so talented...
| Darkened-Sun 3/30/09 . chapter 1
i like the jasper ending better
| TwilightJemS 2/6/09 . chapter 1
Well I like this ending better... I wish I had been into reading fanfiction when you started "Ruina" so I could've voted for Edward! Although I understand the pain, MOST problems can be worked though if we let them. I think it's hard on younger people (yes, I'm OLD, too old but anyway...) to accept that you have to work through your problems. No relationship is or will be perfect - it's a compromise.
Thanks for sharing your story & doing the alt ending!
| vampiregirl200 1/2/09 . chapter 1
ah good ending! i was so mad when she cjose jasper but now i'm happy :) good job
| chocochipcookie 11/16/08 . chapter 1
now that's a real ending!
i love ito
please keep the fics coming..i love your writings
| Lillie Cullen 10/30/08 . chapter 1
This was a beautiful story, and Just Us is the right ending to it. That's just the way it should be. :)
| dawntwilight000 8/31/08 . chapter 1