I love it!! :]
The way you write is so awesome!
You should write more chapters ;]

axel rambling about the bug going to kill him and him being one foot and half outside his door was funney! i cant believe he did that for twelve minutes!? awesome story, its cool how you sort of left a cliff hanger after you find out roxas and riku are more than friends. makes you think. thanks for the story!

wow I absolutely loved the back story on Axel
pyromania, agoraphobia, nothing I’ve ever seen before
creative, funny as all hell, wonderful narrative voice
I ♥ the Axel you created here
*rolls on floor in warm fuzzies over pyro-agoraphobic Axel with major issues*

haha, that's funny... i'm sure if you asked any of my friends they would say i have mental problems which i do... and my name's zinira. try finding someone else with that name! lol

loved this story by the way. i loved the ending, just completely random and hilarious. reminds me of me and my twin sister...


anyways, it's lovely

keep writing!

BreathlessFlame AKA Zinira

I really really loved this!
It had me laughing the whole time XD
It was great and it left wishing for more XD
Ah wells..we'll just have to wonder won't we? ^_^
That's fine though!

But again, this was really great and very funny!

man
roxas's life is confusing.
it's like
riku is cheating on sora with roxas and i have no idea what is with namine and kairi
though im sure we'll find out, right?
and poor axel with his phobia.

Love,
Faye Silo

OMG this had me laughing so hard! I love the little touches you added too it, i dont remember the old lady being in the first draft, but it was a brilliant addition! I wish you chaptered it, because this is so fun and you can't help but wonder what will happen next XD

Poor Roxas, what has he gotten himself into?

lmao!

oh my goodness, axel's the funniest thing EVER! hahaha, i was laughing so hard the entire time! i don't really get the whole part where kairi, sora, riku and namine go to roxas' house, though. (cuz i'm assuming that's who that was). anyways, great story, it was really REALLY funny. :D

I liked it a lot. I am wondering why there aren't more reviews on this...