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| Tigereyes9 2008-07-23 ch 15,  | abusegasp! oh man i thought he wanted laki! what's going to happen!?! please update soon! |
| tammy 2008-07-17 ch 14, anon. | abuseOh come on that was so good. you can't leave us hanging like that. More update. |
| tigereyes9 2008-07-17 ch 14, anon. | abuseOh i'm so excited! please continue! i can't wait to see what happens! |
| spiritsstar 2008-07-17 ch 14, | abusenice chapter, really funny at the begining, you ended it with angst and the cherry on top was the cliffhanger :) update soon, must read next chapter |
| JW 2008-07-14 ch 13, anon. | abuseI am completely addicted and cannot wait for the next chapter. Christine Feehan couldn't have done a better job for Dominic. |
| slynn64 2008-07-12 ch 13, | abuseGood progression! Excellent story line! I can't wait for the next installment. Keep up the good work! |
| spiritsstar 2008-07-10 ch 13, | abuseNice chapter! liked the dynamic of it ana i love how the story is developing, guess there'll be more action when razvan makes a move :) update as soon a you can please oh, and in the first line of dominics' point of view you need to change "wear" to where |
| Rainalyn 2008-07-01 ch 12, anon. | abuseVery good story line. I'm definitely enjoying it! I'll be waiting eagerly for the next chapter! Thanks!! |
| slynn64 2008-06-29 ch 12, | abuseWell done! I haven't noticed in plot flaws. Your story compliments Feehans series very well! I like the way the story is progressing. I am not a editor, but I enjoy reading this very much. |
| slynn64 2008-06-28 ch 11, anon. | abuseThis is a good chapter. It causes the story to progress. It answered some of the questions readers may have from previous chapters. The relationship between hero and heroine is progressing at a good pace. Nicely done. I am looking forward to the next chapter. |
| spiritsstar 2008-06-19 ch 11, | abuseGREAT CHAPTER! and the plot thickens, update soon :) and by the way, i saw a little error on the last sentence where it says "He’d have to key to having all of..." you should change the first "to" to "the", it'll make more sense "he'd have the key to having all the powers of both..." |
| mistylove 2008-06-19 ch 11, | abusereally enjoyed can't wait for the next chapter |
| Tamara 2008-06-11 ch 10, anon. | abuseI loved this chapter. this story is so good. more please |
| KikiPet 2008-06-11 ch 10, | abuseYep Yep, Big bad Dominic keeps getting blindsided by those girls.. keep going, I'm eatin' this up! K.P. |
| mistylove 2008-06-11 ch 10, | abuseSorry I try to review.I can't wait to see what happens next.I hope nothing happens to the little girl. |