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| wyvernrider 2008-04-21 ch 2, anon. | abuseWow, I read the first review and I was shocked. That individual not only takes fictional characters FAR too seriously, but obviously DID NOT READ YOUR STORY CORRECTLY. What an idiot. So in that case, don't listen to em'! I personally had a good laugh with this. I thought it was witty and clever, and I had a hell of a good time reading it. I loved the part about Tali in the first chapter xD I could imagine her wanting to fix that horrible machine. ^^ Keep up the great work! |
| Hypocrite? 2008-04-19 ch 1, anon. | abuseYour Shepard sounds very racist. Hating on the Turian and wishing him to starve to death in their elevators? Then to end it with Ashley's mention on aliens on the ship? Your Shepard is a hypocrite, racist, closed-minded, a terrible leader, and a nasty piece of work. Why dont you just join Saren? You can't huh? Because he's a turian. With that said. Good work on creating a very nasty Shepard who isn't understanding, kind, and giving. Good work! I love it. |