Aww... I loved this story, I read it all the way though without stopping! X3 Very creative ^^ I think you captured all the characters perfectly and I'm very glad that Fuji and Eiji got to be together in the end, yet wish that they could see Momo and Inui more ^^ And yeah, it would have been too perfect if Eiji got all his memories back...:3 Great work again, I'm faving this story so I can come some day and re-read it ^-^

tezuka:
That was a great story! Some grammar/spelling mistakes, but only, like, a couple! I saw this story before, but was kinda reluctant to read it until now based on what I read from the summary. IT'S AWESOME though! I totally regret not reading it earlier.
The hospital scene was so detailed, I can picture Inui and Renji being doctors. :)
Your stories are really well-written and all have good plots!
Sugoi... ^_^ And you really know your Japan geography!
Keep up the wonderful work!
--pizzabagels

I like how Eiji didn't quite remember his past, it gave a good feeling and I think he can be a little happier this way. I really like how you ended it, it was so smooth and surprising, and finished up so cleanly with Oishi's confrontation, the way he let them go and how Fuji told him about papa, how they caught papa was brilliant btw XD and I loved this last part with them barely exchanging greetings throw the window. -glomps- Thank you for writing, very good fic!

whoa is awsome i love this story really, it was so ... i dont know how to describe it, nya awsome

oh Tezuka-san! this was so beatuiful! the plot was writtan out so well! I loved the ending I'm so glad Mom and Inui came out alive! and to add Renji in too! yay!
but its sad you had to kill taka-san but I still loved this story!

They met, I'm so happy. I agree, letting Eiji get his memories back would be too perfect.

This might sound strange, but I was wondering if you could do a one-shot, where by another miracle, all four of them me up again years later? I hope you do, but if you don't I'll understand.

Man, such an exciting chapter. But Fuji is probably right, Momo an Inui got caught. I wonder if their plan works.

What? Oishi seen them, what will happen? The police got Momo and Inui, didn't they?!

Wah! He is awake but doesn't remeber anything. How will Eiji be okay now that Renji is goin to come around anymore?

Wow, RHS was being careless if they didn't notice the FW on the mail. I hope Momo and Inui don't get caught.

Such a sad chapter. I know I put this in like every chapter since Eiji was shot, but I want him to live. Like the scene between Momo, Inui, and Ken. Ken needs to die.

Okay,I have to make this chapter my favorite. Everyone is in character, and I love Fuji, the nurse, and Renji's acting. I agree with Fuji, how much is known about Inui.

What a chapter! Loved everything, especially the chase. Is he going to live? What plan? What goods? Too much suspense!

NO! Don't tell me he died! Besides that nice chapter.

What would Momoshiro do if one of them fall? Gah! I want to know how it ends!! I hope Eiji doesn't die. What did Inui say to Fuji?