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Reviews for: Once Upon A Pool Party
BFP 3/3/05 . chapter 1
OMG NOT THE LONG AWAITED "SQUEAL"!1!1!11 (your typo not mine ;)). *snort* Who waited upon it? and no you don't count. And, sorry to disappoint, but even if we'd read the first one, your shit wouldn't make any sense. Why do you encourage reader to bore themselves to death on your sh-fic?
thepaxilfairy 3/23/02 . chapter 1
FUNNY FUNNY FUNNY FUNNY...but...me no in it...*sniff* Oh well...FUNNY FUNNY FUNNY FUNNY!
Starlit Anabelle 3/6/02 . chapter 1
LOL! :D
Professor Authordude 1/4/02 . chapter 1
HAHAHAHAHAHAHA! Oh my gosh Halo that was so funny!
Lairuniel 12/16/01 . chapter 1
RAFL! THAT WAS BRILLIANT HALO! I LOVE THESE FICS!
Princess Tyler Briefs 10/3/01 . chapter 1
Hey I wasn't in this story much. *cries* Oh well! I (l) it!
www 9/30/01 . chapter 1
4) Gohan: I came prepared!

Gohan get out his surf board, but instead Piccolo jumps on it.

Piccolo: BEHOLD MY POWER! WOAH! *Piccolo falls off board* That's the funniest part ever! Great story Halo!
Fuku-Sensei 9/30/01 . chapter 1
Hee hee that is so cute, ALL FEAR MY ALTER EGO DEMON KARA FOR SHE IS MIGHTY!
Mystic Blossom 9/30/01 . chapter 1
Lol! Please write more!
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