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| Veronica Marie 2008-09-21 ch 1,  | abusePlease write some more on this story. I really like it, it's interesting. |
| kim 2008-09-18 ch 3, anon. | abuseso nice.. =) I totally like it... its a little sad though but very romantic.. =) Keep up the good work... I look forward to the next chapter...=) |
| AntoSama 2008-09-07 ch 3, | abusehi!! i really like your fic! please, keep writting the 4th chapter! please!! Anto |
| narutodaisuke93 2008-09-07 ch 3, anon. | abuseOkay... I have a guestion to asked? When will you update! IT is SEPTEMBER already for godsake! You could at least update once a month instead of let YOUR READER wondering about what will happened next for what 3 months? Please UPDATE SOON! I understand that you were busy for your studies and vice versa, but at least please considered OUR feelings!! I hope you will update soon! |
| Reignashii 2008-08-10 ch 3, | abuseo.o you need to update this story! its good! i look forward to the next chapter! |
| an artist's angel 2008-07-31 ch 3, | abuseOh, this story is too kawaii! it seriously made me tear up a bit... please, i'm begging, *kneels* write another chapter! |
| Love Inc. 2008-07-19 ch 3, | abuseGreat story, love the plot, Oh the suspense is killing me, I wonder why Len wants her to meet him. Please continue and update soon, I'm really enjoying your story Great work, keep it up. Love, Love Inc. x |
| xSweetEternityx 2008-07-04 ch 3, | abuseAnother wonderful story like always! I really love this fic!! Please continue writing soon!! I'll look forward with anticipation for your next one. =) |
| anitsirhc 2008-06-29 ch 3, | abusei thought there was already exciting moments, that's why i didn't leave a review for the previous chapters.hope to hear from you soon.i liked the story.there are many ideas were created in my imagination when i read the title of your story.keep up the good work!update soon. :) |
| steven watemaker 2008-06-20 ch 3, | abuseah, the classic miriae cliffhanger... “But Hino-chan, ice cream will be good for you...” tsk..tsk.. there there kazuki. It's an improvement, but it's still pretty bland. I'm sure the thing that eclipses your talent will come out soon. |
| steven watemaker 2008-06-17 ch 2, | abuseah, yes... your wit with words has returned. I'm glad. although, it still fails to capture the reader's attention (that is, if they're not looking for the pairing, again...) I'm impressed on how you kept the characters in-character (boy, that sounded weird). Also, I love the plot twist. |
| steven watemaker 2008-06-17 ch 1, | abuseHonestly, this isn't one of your better chapters. It pretty much lacked depth to capture the reader's interest (especially when the reader was not looking for the pairing itself). And the chapter did not possess the distinctive charm of your work, making it seem unnatural and lacking. However, what you did manage to achieve was a great plot device, and a premise that fits really well with the series. All in all, your premise was good, but the execution was a bit flawed. |
| skippy 2008-06-14 ch 3, anon. | abusenice...hehe... |
| Matoki 2008-06-12 ch 3, | abuseThis is apretty awesome story so far. Your chapters are decent lengths, your characters go through tribulations, and best of all, they're all in character. Quite a feat. |
| narutodaisuke93 2008-06-10 ch 3, anon. | abuseUPDATE!PLEASE! PLEASE UPDATE! |