Reviews for The Magician's Assistant

Reviews For: The Magician's Assistant

Waynhim Duhkkha 2008-05-04 ch 3,	abuseYou have a nice plot going but I don't like the idea that Willy Wonka is famous because of this Hambridge guy who calls himself Waldo Weirton! To fix this please have Willy exceed Weirton and be able to make better candy that will puzzle Weirton. Wonka is supposed to be the original prodigy. However it's your story, so do with it what you will.
Yva J. 2008-05-02 ch 3,	abuseInteresting group of characters. The only thing that I would say is there is no real quiet section of Lindau (at least not on the island). It would be like trying to find a nice quiet section of Manhattan. There's so much tourism there that I am under the impression that there is always something going on there. We spent only an afternoon there, but this town basically exists through tourism. There are tons of restaurants and hotels there. Just FYI. I really love you have this set in a place that I have actually been to. :) I'm looking forward to Willy and Terrance getting there and what their impressions are going to be. So far this is good.
Yva J. 2008-05-02 ch 2,	abuseI was in Lindau on holiday last year, it's a beautiful area and it's right on the bank of Lake Constanz (or in German Bodensee). It's a beautiful area. As for the story, I am anxious to read where this goes as you are writing about two places where I have actually visited (as above and Berlin). I'm looking forward to reading more of this and finding out where your research takes you. If I can help, just let me know. I'm excited about findiing out what happens next. You write this really well, and I love the stories where Willy is a boy, they give us another angle of his character. Nice job. :)
Yva J. 2008-04-20 ch 1,	abuseNice start to what looks to be an interesting story. You have some great back story going on with Terrence's background, so I am looking forward to seeing where you take this. Looking forward to more. I can't think of anything else to say besides that. Glad that Willy's dental gear is gone. I really felt sorry for him during his youth. Oh well, good job. It's an original idea.
The-Wonka-Empire 2008-04-19 ch 1,	abuseHello. I read the story previous to this one, and I must say I got hooked. I've got hooked to most of your stories you've written in this catergory. The sequel to 'I am Who I am' looks quite promising. I'll sure be looking forward to the next chapter ;)

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