omg i loved it! that was awesome, maybe you could go with this idea and make it into a length-e-er story, because that waould be awesome!Keep Writing

This is a great fic, awesome job!

OH MY GOD

This is the best Angel/Cordy fic I have ever read. You are amazing

Keep on writing, you Angel!

Luv,

CAPRICORNUS152

Excellent, excellent story! You tied up all the loose ends and caused it to be the way it should be, and if you write a sequel, we guarantee you we'll read it! We would like permission to include your story in the other fiction part of our site, Love on the High Seas, and would also like to invite you to read our series, LotHS, which includes Angel, Captain Jack Sparrow's First Mate, falling in love with Princess Cordelia and she with him in a Pirate's world. If you read, please be sure to let us know what you think, and regardless, please let us know if we may or may not have your permission to link to your story!

This is a great story and I love reading it. the story really shows the relationship between the two. I hated the way that the show proved the relationship. Great Job!

What a beautiful story! I really wish that Angel would have happened like this! Excellent story!

it was good except i think the porblem was solved too easily adn that ptb wouldn't usually let them get off that easy...even with the whole episode in to shansu in la. i'm not tryin to put u down or nething, just sayin wut i think

Loved this it's really really good

from Kimmers

Ohhh! I like this a lot! Please write a sequel! Great story! Just one suggestion, can you put a few little hints of Wes/Fred in your next story?

Thanks

Pyro Wings

loved that! loved that! ahhhhhh! newfound A/C fan here and that was by far the cutest fic i've read! cute cute cute! very duckie! (long story...) i'm gonna go read more now! ahhh!

- Grabs her pickets and signs and goes on parade, yelling. - SEQUELS! SEQUELS! SEQUELS! It was very good.

I love it. It was great maybe serque of this story and the story line rule.

I love the storyline. But you should rewrite it to make it longer. In my opinion of course! It's good the way it is too! :)

Awwwww, very very cute! I love the idea of Cordy/Angel, and I you portrayed them very realistically. Great job!

Well this fic felt quite rushed to it seems a bit too easy to just have the PTB fix it's a nice fantasy,huh? :o) As for the idea of Cordy/Angel,I have not explored that 'ship very deeply but it is starting to hold a lot of promise...I can see how those two fit together in ways Buffy/Angel does not.

Keep writing-whether it's a sequel or just something else that's fun!