hilarious! needs anoughter capter though.

Lance really needs to learn. I love Lancitty but at the same time I think Lance should stop and move on. Kitty strings him and Peter along just for attention and ends up hurting Lance always in the end, which just makes me really mad. But at the same time when they have those awwww moments its so bittersweet and sickening at the same time. Oops sorry for the rant, great story. And nice song choice, however I think more appropriate would be 'Do that thing you do' by the Wonders. Not my favorite style of rock but it fits Lance and Kitty's relationship. Great job! Sorry for being a bit of a critic and ranting. A lot of ranting. I think I'll just stop typing now.

hahahahaha!

-Ace

HAHAHAHAHAHAHAAHA! *whipes tears from eyes* THAT'S HISTRATICAL!

omg that was the funniest thing i have ever read! "i knew lance was disturbed but i didnt know how disturbed"! ha! im laughing so hard im crying!

very funny!

Aww poor Lance,

I know you wrote this story ages ago but I only found it today and I totally love it.

Moulin Rouge!

you really are great at stories, I read a few of your other ones

OMG, that's so funny! Lance has gone completelt crazy...

LMAO! This was an awesome ficcie! YAYS

OMG! That was totally funny! Good Job!

Why must you torture lance so? you are evil! lance would never degrade himself so!...please continue :)

HILARIOUS! lance singing?too sad.

Xavier's line was great.

this is truly priceless! My friend is writing a Lance and kitty story . You should check it out.

continue

this is funny keep writing