 rxtetrodotoxin 2008-09-13 . chapter 6You write Kakuzu well.
Kakuzu lived in the Village Hidden in the Waterfall
So I don't think he lived by the ocean.
But I like the idea.
And you didn't make him sappy about being home, which I like. But thinking about the little memories, and the fact that the fruit was off limits except for special times was great, because (to me at least) it seems that his father was more about money, leading to how Kakuzu got to be such a miser.
Keep up the good work!
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