 Terry Kay 7/3/09 . chapter 1Cute! Very nice piece. Thank you. |
 Stephanie rsfanatic 10/31/01 . chapter 1 I liked this story; one thing I always like is reading about those texi scenes! |
 Vikki 10/8/01 . chapter 1 This was cute - but I find it hard to believe that Amanda would have come up with "Skippy" as a possible nickname for Lee at this point in time. If she had barely met him, she wouldn't have known that his uncle called him "Skip." |
 Rangerbaldwin 10/7/01 . chapter 1 I don't think the dialogue here is likely at all...Lee didn't even want Amanda around him, but Billy forced it. Lee wouldn't be stopping to say hi when he saw her...he'd more likely try to avoid her. In season One, Lee was very smug and self-centered and he thought he didn't need an assistant, parnter, or any sort of help. Ranger B. |
 Rena 10/1/01 . chapter 1 Enjoyed this story very much, Bridget! Keep up the great writing! |
 RkieFan 10/1/01 . chapter 1Bridget, this was so cool. I like your take on how that scene from the credits might've come about. |
 Lattelady 9/30/01 . chapter 1Very cute story. I've always wondered which episode that particular scene was cut from. You have given it a nice home. |
 Miranda 9/30/01 . chapter 1 Hey Bridget...cute story! Although I feel the same way about the Mandy thing as Amanda I must admit...eventually you get used to it! This is a cute story about the scene everyone wonders about in the credits! |
 EmilyAnn1 9/30/01 . chapter 1This was a nice story - certainly the taxi-cab scene is one of the lingering mysteries of the series, and it was very nice to see your take on it. I liked Francine's reception of Amanda, and Amanda's eagerness - very in character for first season. The Mandy/Manda issue was a nice 'nod' as well (it would be interesting to see just why it is that she doesn't like those nicknames). Having Lee forget her was an interesting twist - one that, in some ways I could see and in others I couldn't. - so nice food for thought. I would say, however, that while grammatically correct, and technically flawless, in my opinion, the story could benefit with a little variety in sentence structure and richer lexicon. The narrative read very 'simply' (for lack of a better word), with few paragraphs more than a sentence long and many sentences in a similar form. This led it for me (and this is just one reader's opinion) to read a little flat. |