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| Neheh Kha 2008-07-21 ch 7,  | abuseSweet. I bet Altair will wonder what 'awesome' or 'rocking' means... He's funny... but hot. Thanks for the seven great chapters, now if there were only eight. |
| creativedesigner 2008-07-10 ch 1, | abuseYou should continue this, so far it's awesome.Great job! |
| Sanriko 2008-06-27 ch 7, | abuseHmm...Emma seems to have a hidden past that has been ticked into action from her coming into the world. Well, I suppose there is a reason why a person is put somewhere in the first place. (Is nodding to hersself) I suppose it is safe to say Emma is not like every other teenage girl and will be facing more chalenges that would probabl involve more bloodshed... Oh yes, how old is she exactaly?...I think I may have missed that throughout the chapters, sorry!^^ And the fact the Altair is going all friend like towards Emma causes me to smile (See, you did have a soft side, Altair!). ^_^ |
| Gaignun Girl 2008-06-26 ch 7, | abuseHaha. Happy Late B-day! Lol. I heart this story a lot. Do update as you can! =] XD Gaignun Girl |
| 15animefreak15 2008-06-24 ch 1, | abuseThis looks good. I've always dreamed of being in one of my favorite videogames. ^^ Oh, but you spelled ladder wrong. It has two d's, not two a's. |
| Kuroro-chan 2008-06-24 ch 1, | abuseKeep going! It's getting better and better! |
| Mandalore18 2008-06-24 ch 7, | abuseVery discriptive with the battle scene all good in the end nice update. |
| xXTheAphoticQuintessenceXx 2008-06-24 ch 7, | abuseyayness! Favorite kinds of chapters, battle, and fluffy! ^_^ and you put them together! XDD can't wait for the next chapter! ~Xane |
| zutaralover5 2008-06-19 ch 6, | abuseomg!! i luv it! keep updating! |
| Suck-A-Butt 2008-06-08 ch 6, | abuseI like choosing the kingdom I like to ride on the horsy welp NICE CHAPTER I LOOK FOREWARD TO YER NEXT AND your so lucky my school lets out on the 20th plus I just came back from a feild trip with sun burn it hurts yet on the positive side my sister told me I look good with some color (I am being a sour-puss you can't hear it but I was being sarcastic towards the "positive" part) WELL ANYWAY SEE YOU NEXT REVEIW pay no attention to my pen name |
| hockeyychick88 2008-06-03 ch 6, | abuseAHH! Again! You have left me in suspence on a cliff hanger! You evil little...just kidding. =) I'm L O V I N ' this story it's awesome! I know Emma is just gonna kick their as...butts! Until then...hope your mom gets better. :) Oh yeah...awesome chapter by the way.. lol Keep it up. |
| The Emotional Tree 2008-06-03 ch 6, | abuseI like it. Can't wait until the next update! |
| MeliZxAltair 2008-06-03 ch 6, | abuseNice one. Keep up!:) |
| Gaignun Girl 2008-06-02 ch 6, | abuseMy mom will be doing that to me sometimes, it gets annoying. But, anyway good chapter, can't wait what will happen next. Also, keep up with the good work! =) XD Gaignun Girl |
| Mandalore18 2008-06-02 ch 6, | abuseAS promised I will reveiw agine and it was good. One thing to point out near the end when Altair was stabed it seems that he was caught off gaurd too easily but other then that good job. |