This was lovely, whether as a one-shot or a chaptered story. I think it has the potential to go somewhere very good indeed, though I realise it's been more than a year since you first posted it, so it's unlikely you have any interest in continuing it now. Regardless, I enjoyed it quite a lot--so many gracefully-included details and character quirks.

What a fantastic story! I particularly love your take on post-series Ambrose; he's such a difficult character to write for, yet you do it not only beautifully, but believably as well. Also, your description of Glitch as some sort of abandoned marionette is absolutely brilliant. I think I never quite got the look until I read this piece, honestly. Then of course the counterpart, Ambrose, as "the same man, all dusted off and repainted" etc. is just perfect. I'm delighted that in both descriptions one can see not only the character, but the actor as well.

Anyway, the tarot reference is very interesting and you handled it quite cleverly. I really liked the strain you put on the DG/Glitch/Ambrose relationship. It would've been so interesting to see where that went, although I doubt you're still planning on continuing this (wish you would!). I just thought you should know how much I enjoyed reading it. :)

oh please do make this more to a story it very good i love it

Though your story was written quite a long ago, I'd like to say thank you for it. This fic - a oneshot or not - is really well-written and simply great.

You should REALLY continue this! Please!? Even if it's just one more part to wrap things up.

Once again, your insight into the characters astounds me. I definitely love your Ambrose and his contrast to Glitch. The complexity you've put into him is great. For once, Ambrose stays in character and lives up to his intelligence with his information recall and subtle games. He easily reads people and can be blunt or play oblivious when it suits him. He is obviously aware of the Glitch persona but discards it to maintain the "effete pompousness." He's not as in control as he would like, though, when a bit of the former Glitch shows through in his frustration with DG. It'll be interesting to see what he will become with all his potential. You've really got a knack for writing the younger idealistic girls with a not-so-bad guy, and oh yes, this story is going somewhere good. It's already gone there.

Well I very much enjoyed the premise and your execution. I would dearly love to see this continue. Good work!

Awesome, please continue!

i loved it! :)
id definitly like to read more

Totally awesome. It's what they really would say, if in the movie. Aah, sometimes love can be so damn cold! LOL
And by the way, it's ME! :D

Very nicely written. I love his reaction at the end when she walked away.
Please...pretty please, continue this!
xD

This is very different and I like it. I do hope things pan out in the next chapter cuz this is gettin good :P

This was neat. I like how you are writing their interactions... so cold and different, but at the same time you can feel that there is still some chemistry going on there. Good use of the tarot reference too. Definitely would love more of this!

wow! i really liked this! oh do please finish it! if anything you will have me to read it till the end ^_^

Never seen Tin Man, but this made me want to :)