 Hiei's Cute Girl 2009-08-16 . chapter 7Ahahaha! My perverted side was hoping for more than just a kiss. XD I'm sure Ryoma will gradulally find new things to make her shout about... almost positive he's going to have her scream her lungs out one day. Possibly tape the shriek and perhaps force her to play it during the matches. XD A desperate, breathy "RYOMAH!" Will cut through the other shouts like a hot knife through butter!
While his sempai-tachi wonder what the hell Ryoma did to have such a quiet girl scream like that and think the worst. XD Oishi might just spontaneously combust...
Perverted teenage boys make me smile.
Best of luck on the makings of the next chapter! If I may, can I give a prompt? Something along the lines of: "Rainbow Fanta (ponta)". You never know when cherry lips and a grape fanta could make such a tasty combination...
I loved the grenade ordeal too. XD It reminded me of Kikumaru's "Bazooka!" shot. XD The time when the manga artist drew Eiji-nya with a bazooka over his shoulder screaming 'EAT THIS, **!' will stay with me forever. Now all I have to imagine is Ryoma aiming his grenade launcher with a fierce expression (because he's too refines to scream like Eiji does), and I think I would just drop dead from laughing too hard. XD |
 freaky14 2009-05-24 . chapter 7KAWAII! *smiles dreamily* There were some typos, but I could still understand it. It's really cute, Yeah, you could really make a story out of that 'Just What the Doctor Ordered' really cute plot. But I could imagine, slighter mature things with that plot. Since, Ryoma's a bit flirty? heheh
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 freaky14 2009-05-24 . chapter 6Aw~ PART THREE!! KYAA~ I love this flirty, cute, pretend-innocent Ryoma! KYA~ |
 freaky14 2009-05-24 . chapter 5aw... I don't hate him anymore (I did hate and like him in the other chapter/ well of course! I'm on Ryoma's side! heheh) |
 freaky14 2009-05-24 . chapter 4aw~ kawaii... so innocent, *hearts* MOE! |
 freaky14 2009-05-24 . chapter 3YAY! KYAA~ WHOA! Ryoma is flirty? Hehehe~
I read from the start! I love your one shots! SO MUCH! |
 Mrs Hatake Itachi 2009-05-01 . chapter 7Yup Sakuno definitely is! |
 sapphireracoongal 2009-04-07 . chapter 7This is just so sweet and innocent!! Ah, young love.. =D |
 Bloody Rose021 2009-04-04 . chapter 7I really loved this chapter, especially the way he made her shout, heehee. ^^ |
 Bloody Rose021 2009-04-04 . chapter 1that was so cute! ^^ |
 Gingeh 2009-04-03 . chapter 7Wonderful, as always ^-^. The plot was good, sweet, and funny, and I giggled more then once ;P
Have I ever mentioned how much I love the way you write Ryoma? It's //perfect//, should he ever decide to act romantically.
'The smirk grew more pronounced he spotted the jaw-slack expressions of his fellow teammates who had no doubt heard her shout and noticed the second kiss.'
That made me laugh. Again, perfect!
Anyway, fantastic job, and sorry for the late review ^^' |
 Devatron2000 2009-03-31 . chapter 7it's great the whole bunch of them and I hope you write more on the DR. one |
 jHeyTTernallie 2009-03-31 . chapter 7your oneshots are really cute! =] |
 SnowCharms 2009-03-30 . chapter 7Lol, kawai! They are definitely the best for each other, I wonder what the fans would do now. I'm betting that the ice cream and confectionary shops are going to have a field day. Update! |
 midnight blue08 2009-03-30 . chapter 7sakuno is really quiet but as you say he has ways to hear her hahahahha |