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Hiei's Cute Girl
2009-08-16 . chapter 7
Ahahaha! My perverted side was hoping for more than just a kiss. XD I'm sure Ryoma will gradulally find new things to make her shout about... almost positive he's going to have her scream her lungs out one day. Possibly tape the shriek and perhaps force her to play it during the matches. XD A desperate, breathy "RYOMAH!" Will cut through the other shouts like a hot knife through butter!

While his sempai-tachi wonder what the hell Ryoma did to have such a quiet girl scream like that and think the worst. XD Oishi might just spontaneously combust...

Perverted teenage boys make me smile.

Best of luck on the makings of the next chapter! If I may, can I give a prompt? Something along the lines of: "Rainbow Fanta (ponta)". You never know when cherry lips and a grape fanta could make such a tasty combination...

I loved the grenade ordeal too. XD It reminded me of Kikumaru's "Bazooka!" shot. XD The time when the manga artist drew Eiji-nya with a bazooka over his shoulder screaming 'EAT THIS, **!' will stay with me forever. Now all I have to imagine is Ryoma aiming his grenade launcher with a fierce expression (because he's too refines to scream like Eiji does), and I think I would just drop dead from laughing too hard. XD
freaky14
2009-05-24 . chapter 7
KAWAII! *smiles dreamily* There were some typos, but I could still understand it. It's really cute, Yeah, you could really make a story out of that 'Just What the Doctor Ordered' really cute plot. But I could imagine, slighter mature things with that plot. Since, Ryoma's a bit flirty? heheh

WRITE MORE!
freaky14
2009-05-24 . chapter 6
Aw~ PART THREE!! KYAA~ I love this flirty, cute, pretend-innocent Ryoma! KYA~
freaky14
2009-05-24 . chapter 5
aw... I don't hate him anymore (I did hate and like him in the other chapter/ well of course! I'm on Ryoma's side! heheh)
freaky14
2009-05-24 . chapter 4
aw~ kawaii... so innocent, *hearts* MOE!
freaky14
2009-05-24 . chapter 3
YAY! KYAA~ WHOA! Ryoma is flirty? Hehehe~

I read from the start! I love your one shots! SO MUCH!
Mrs Hatake Itachi
2009-05-01 . chapter 7
Yup Sakuno definitely is!
sapphireracoongal
2009-04-07 . chapter 7
This is just so sweet and innocent!! Ah, young love.. =D
Bloody Rose021
2009-04-04 . chapter 7
I really loved this chapter, especially the way he made her shout, heehee. ^^
Bloody Rose021
2009-04-04 . chapter 1
that was so cute! ^^
Gingeh
2009-04-03 . chapter 7
Wonderful, as always ^-^. The plot was good, sweet, and funny, and I giggled more then once ;P

Have I ever mentioned how much I love the way you write Ryoma? It's //perfect//, should he ever decide to act romantically.
'The smirk grew more pronounced he spotted the jaw-slack expressions of his fellow teammates who had no doubt heard her shout and noticed the second kiss.'
That made me laugh. Again, perfect!

Anyway, fantastic job, and sorry for the late review ^^'
Devatron2000
2009-03-31 . chapter 7
it's great the whole bunch of them and I hope you write more on the DR. one
jHeyTTernallie
2009-03-31 . chapter 7
your oneshots are really cute! =]
SnowCharms
2009-03-30 . chapter 7
Lol, kawai! They are definitely the best for each other, I wonder what the fans would do now. I'm betting that the ice cream and confectionary shops are going to have a field day. Update!
midnight blue08
2009-03-30 . chapter 7
sakuno is really quiet but as you say he has ways to hear her hahahahha
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