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Reviews For: Mortal Kombat

Kazua 2008-08-03 ch 2,	abuseinteresting i must say. though personally i perfer the Warhammer/Eva crossovers myself though still i'm going to read this all the same. though i wonder what kind of moves and such has Shinji learned? it would've been cool if Scorpion, Reptile, or Sub-Zero tutored him. anyway i await the next chapter.
Biohazard 101 2008-04-23 ch 2,	abuse3rd Angel: What the * are you talking...! EVA-01: punches him across the street 3rd Angel: OH! IT'S ON! Heh heh heh. I'm usually bias concerning rewrites, but this is actually looking pretty interesting. Will there be anybody else showing up besides Raiden?
Neferius 2008-04-22 ch 2,	abuseOkay, I viewed Shinji challenging Gendo as a humorous scene. It reminded me of when an oblivious hero ignores the ranting of a villain. The only problem I've had is that Raiden has appeared already. Even so, I don't think it hurts the story, considering he probably wont be staying long. So far it's getting more interesting. Read ya Later.
Daetor 2008-04-22 ch 2,	abuseOkay... that was weird but funny as well. I didn't expect Shinji to challenge Gendo to MK as soon as he saw him though, but it fits I guess. Oh, don't tell me, Raiden took the letter to Shinji right? Anyway, I can't wait to see what you do with the fight. Have you decided on the pairings? Or are you taking votes? If you're taking votes, I vote for Shinji and Asuka. Meh, good luck with your work and have fun writing it. Should you really start another fic BTW? I mean you already have enough of unfinished fics.
Major Mike Powell III 2008-04-21 ch 1,	abuseWell, well, soldier... This is unheard of! Pretty damn original, son. I gotta give it to ya. Good job for a first chapter. I was hesitant at first, but I think I'll begin to like this thing. May I suggest a Shinji/Misato pairing? (Wink, wink) Let's see just HOW did Gendo find'im, as he was off in Edenia. Keep it up, son. Semper-Fi! Carry on!
RahXephon 2008-04-21 ch 1,	abuseEnding sentences with a dot is too lowly for the great Shinji Ikari01! P.S. Your chapter is too short.
Neferius 2008-04-20 ch 1,	abuseSadly, I can't say much about this chapter since there wasn't too much new information. Still, it's looking promising as I've never seen this crossover before. Read ya Later.
acepro Evolution 2008-04-20 ch 1,	abuseVery intriguing! This has to be the first Eva/MK fan fiction I have ever read, in fact, possibly the only one ever written to my knowledge. So far I like it because it shows a huge mystery behind it and looks like a story worth reading, and I like surprises. I hope you continue this story. Till my next review and remember me by my words - - WICKET UN TUSH ON LEGS!?
gunman 2008-04-20 ch 1,	abuseI was at first hesitant in reading this. An Eva/Mortal Kombat crossover? Not that I hadn't been thinking about that myself, but how to do it right was a problem. As the normal and obvious method would be to have Shinji get adopted by the Mortal Kombat fighters. In my case I would have chosen Lui Kang, or maybe even Sub-Zero. Heck, I could have chosen Nightwolf, but then again he lives in the Hopi Mesa, in America, so that would have been a problem) Having Raiden take Shinji to live with Kitana, Sindel and Jade was quite appropriate, especially how they treated the boy, with kindness. They even adopted him into their family. But it brings to mind a question: if Shinji was taken to another Realm such as Outworld where Kitana, Sindel and Jade live, how did Gendo find him? Not bad, but a little short. Write on!
Marq Fyori-Josdyas Auricor 2008-04-20 ch 1,	abuseGood concept. AFAIK, this is the first EVA/MK crossover done on this site. The only real mistake that I noticed is that the Third Angel's attack is in 2015, not 2014.
Daetor 2008-04-19 ch 1,	abuseFirst thing I have to say is WOW! You're right, I've checked the whole site and this is the FIRST crossover of this kind. So as far as that goes, you can't get any more original than this. Now we'll have to see how you handle it and what you're going to do with the other characters. I have no idea what you're planing to do here, but for now it sounds like fun. Though, shouldn't you also atempt to finish some of your other fics as well? like Shinji ZERO second or NGE Gabriel? I will wait for future updates, both on this fic and on the others.
kidcrud 2008-04-19 ch 1,	abuseNice This seems interesting to sayte leastbut i cant give a good opinion until i see more
Dookie Overlord 2008-04-19 ch 1,	abuseI was hoping for Sub-Zero, but that's mostly cuz I used him in the game.

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