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| Makurayami Ookami 2008-05-16 ch 1, | abusethis was good and then he goes and e's an evil bastard. oh well. it gives reason as to why draco didn't show in the book. |
| NarcissaMalfoySnape 2008-05-14 ch 1, | abuseHallo! I´m from Germany, so my english isn´t the best - I hope u forgive me =) I just read your story and it was realy nice! Good job to begin with a cit. from the book. you discribed severus snape and draco malfoy very good in charakter and also the spanking. I wasn´t surprised to read, that severus snape has some own rules for his house and that he isn´t interest, if his students already got punished from another teacher. This was a realy good idea. also that draco has to come back saturday to earn the points back he has lost - perfekt!! :) Hope we will read more storys written by you. you have a good phantasie and the points I list up im my reviews are good enough to get far with the story (and if this wasn´t a good english, I will say it with other words: you could write some next chapters ^^). hope to read soon some more! narcissa |
| SpidersBlood 2008-04-19 ch 1, | abuseOMIIGOD! I was disturbed, but I laughed more than cried. XD That was really awesome, and for such a silly punishment, it was really well described, and I felt sorry for Draco. *Blushes madly at how quickly she would pull off her trousers if Severus asked her to* |