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Reviews For: Consequences of Disobedience

Makurayami Ookami
2008-05-16
ch 1,
abusethis was good and then he goes and e's an evil bastard. oh well. it gives reason as to why draco didn't show in the book.
NarcissaMalfoySnape
2008-05-14
ch 1,
abuseHallo!

I´m from Germany, so my english isn´t the best - I hope u forgive me =)
I just read your story and it was realy nice!
Good job to begin with a cit. from the book.
you discribed severus snape and draco malfoy very good in charakter and also the spanking.
I wasn´t surprised to read, that severus snape has some own rules for his house and that he isn´t interest, if his students already got punished from another teacher. This was a realy good idea. also that draco has to come back saturday to earn the points back he has lost - perfekt!! :)
Hope we will read more storys written by you.
you have a good phantasie and the points I list up im my reviews are good enough to get far with the story (and if this wasn´t a good english, I will say it with other words: you could write some next chapters ^^).

hope to read soon some more!
narcissa
SpidersBlood
2008-04-19
ch 1,
abuseOMIIGOD! I was disturbed, but I laughed more than cried. XD That was really awesome, and for such a silly punishment, it was really well described, and I felt sorry for Draco. *Blushes madly at how quickly she would pull off her trousers if Severus asked her to*
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