|Reviews for Marshmallows|
| xjadedjoy 1/18/09 . chapter 2
Woah, the angst.
But I like the story.
Even though I don't think that's how her father would react.
I'd love to see more.
| Bladed Darkness 8/14/08 . chapter 2
Ouch, somebody needs to talk some sense into Robbie Ray it seems.
| SMfan4ever 8/8/08 . chapter 2
wow! that was... wow! keep up the great work!
| wingsxforxmarie 4/23/08 . chapter 1
I think that you've started off this story really great with the first two chapters, but may I give just a little criticism? I think that Miley's father was way out-of-character. On the show he has a bubbly attitude and he's always just very happy and running out on Miley and Jackson and then trying to kill himself are the last two things that I would ever think he would do. And I know that this a femslash story and of course there's going to be times that you'll have to write things out-of-character, but at the root of each person is still going to be their original characteristics, yet I have not seen any of those original traits in Mr. Stewart. I just think that you consider that. And I'm in no way trying to bash your writing, I just wanted to offer a little constructive criticism. But I do think that you're a very talented writer and I'm really interested to see where this story goes.
| Truscott 4/21/08 . chapter 1
Great start :).
| Truscott 4/21/08 . chapter 2
Great chapter :).
| Xx.Get.Over.It.xX 4/21/08 . chapter 2
Wow! Did not see that coming.
Update soon plz!
| Stessa 4/21/08 . chapter 2
Wow. That does not seem like Robbie Ray at all... Mhm. I wonder what'll happen now..
| EveryVillianIsLemons44 4/20/08 . chapter 2
Okay now this story
has definitely hit that
point where I will be always checking for
updates. Great read.
| usiylover2 4/20/08 . chapter 2
WOW! UPDATE SOON! :)
| Everhart13 4/20/08 . chapter 2
Interesting and risky plot detail... but I'm definitely curious to see how you handle it, so update soon please!
| AlvinFan07 4/20/08 . chapter 1
I definatley like what Im reading so far :-) Can't wait to read more
| fja 4/20/08 . chapter 1
| Guitargirl007 4/20/08 . chapter 1
Aw...I like it! Good start, I can tell you know how to write!
| EveryVillianIsLemons44 4/20/08 . chapter 1
Wow, please update this.
It was great.