Woah, the angst.

But I like the story.

Even though I don't think that's how her father would react.

I'd love to see more.

Ouch, somebody needs to talk some sense into Robbie Ray it seems.

wow! that was... wow! keep up the great work!

I think that you've started off this story really great with the first two chapters, but may I give just a little criticism? I think that Miley's father was way out-of-character. On the show he has a bubbly attitude and he's always just very happy and running out on Miley and Jackson and then trying to kill himself are the last two things that I would ever think he would do. And I know that this a femslash story and of course there's going to be times that you'll have to write things out-of-character, but at the root of each person is still going to be their original characteristics, yet I have not seen any of those original traits in Mr. Stewart. I just think that you consider that. And I'm in no way trying to bash your writing, I just wanted to offer a little constructive criticism. But I do think that you're a very talented writer and I'm really interested to see where this story goes.

Great start :).

Great chapter :).

Wow! Did not see that coming.

Update soon plz!

Wow. That does not seem like Robbie Ray at all... Mhm. I wonder what'll happen now..

Holy smokes!

Okay now this story

has definitely hit that

point where I will be always checking for

updates. Great read.

WOW! UPDATE SOON! :)

Interesting and risky plot detail... but I'm definitely curious to see how you handle it, so update soon please!

I definatley like what Im reading so far :-) Can't wait to read more

:)

Aw...I like it! Good start, I can tell you know how to write!

Wow, please update this.

It was great.