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CarolinaH.Manning
2008-09-01 . chapter 1
this is great. Danny really deserves some ** kicking for what he has done and I think Don is the kind of guy who would do that and I liked Stella reaction - the dissapontment and the empathy
Ducky'sgirl4ever
2008-08-08 . chapter 1
A great story. I liked the part where Flack found out that Danny had slept with Rikki.
Funky In Fishnet
2008-04-26 . chapter 1
So painful but so right. Danny needs someone to kick his ** right now, to shake him out of his darkness. This was intense, Stella and Flack confronting him and Danny's anger, and you wrote it really well. Stella telling Danny she's disappointed in him is completely right. Great job :- )
Booth-Bones4life
2008-04-22 . chapter 1
I thought it was pretty good. I'm glad that you wrote a fic where it talks about what effect it would have on other characters instead of Danny and Lindsay because me need more of those.
JennCorinthos
2008-04-21 . chapter 1
This was great... I love to read other peoples reaction to what Danny did...

JENNIFER
leopardprint-farce
2008-04-21 . chapter 1
I read this earlier but didnt have time to review, sorry. I think its really realistic from the dialogue to the situation and the outside at the back alleyway of the bar scene.
"She chuckled mirthlessly. “Because if we know, and she doesn't, then that makes her a fool,” she told him. “And she doesn't deserve that.”
-really liked this part.
And the opening where Flack tries to keep it more chilled out and friendly, although he knows its not going to be good news whatever Danny says to him. The fight is pretty intense, you wrote it so well in my opinion.
Now...twoshot perhaps?
Im greedy, sorry.
ThnksFrThMmrs87
2008-04-21 . chapter 1
Fan freaking tastic. Danny needs a nice butt whooping and we need to see how the others deal with this type of intense betrayal in the lab. Wonderful job
CsI-aDdIcTeD
2008-04-20 . chapter 1
Could you do another chapter? Like Lindsay's reaction or Stella and Flack's support?
PinkDeathNerd
2008-04-20 . chapter 1
I Love it, i'm glad it's not another one of those D/L make up stories. I swear if I read ONE more where they make up I'm gunna get sick :).
lol But I love your story, deffantly my favorite post - right next door story.
katydid13
2008-04-20 . chapter 1
Very good! Stella's right. If they know and they don't tell Lindsay they make her feel like a fool.
Is-Brea-LiomCSI-NY
2008-04-20 . chapter 1
Great story, very down to earth. I hope you're planning on continuing, I'd like to see what happens.
liam22
2008-04-20 . chapter 1
I really like your take on this. You write a great Flack. :)
preston-gal
2008-04-20 . chapter 1
aw i loved this and you are right everyone has been overly concerned about d/l and not about the others.
TessaStarDean
2008-04-20 . chapter 1
I love it. It's angry, it's painful, and it's honest. You got the characters right, and I love that Stella was swearing with the boys. I really think we deserve a Flack/Danny brawl when this comes out on the show. Nicely done!
EverythingIsConnected
2008-04-20 . chapter 1
Wow, I liked Stella and Flack yelling at Danny XD
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