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| Funky In Fishnet 2008-04-26 ch 1,  | abuseSo painful but so right. Danny needs someone to kick his ** right now, to shake him out of his darkness. This was intense, Stella and Flack confronting him and Danny's anger, and you wrote it really well. Stella telling Danny she's disappointed in him is completely right. Great job :- ) |
| Booth-Bones4life 2008-04-22 ch 1, | abuseI thought it was pretty good. I'm glad that you wrote a fic where it talks about what effect it would have on other characters instead of Danny and Lindsay because me need more of those. |
| JennCorinthos 2008-04-21 ch 1, | abuseThis was great... I love to read other peoples reaction to what Danny did... JENNIFER |
| leopardprint-farce 2008-04-21 ch 1, | abuseI read this earlier but didnt have time to review, sorry. I think its really realistic from the dialogue to the situation and the outside at the back alleyway of the bar scene. "She chuckled mirthlessly. “Because if we know, and she doesn't, then that makes her a fool,” she told him. “And she doesn't deserve that.” -really liked this part. And the opening where Flack tries to keep it more chilled out and friendly, although he knows its not going to be good news whatever Danny says to him. The fight is pretty intense, you wrote it so well in my opinion. Now...twoshot perhaps? Im greedy, sorry. |
| ThnksFrThMmrs87 2008-04-21 ch 1, | abuseFan freaking tastic. Danny needs a nice butt whooping and we need to see how the others deal with this type of intense betrayal in the lab. Wonderful job |
| CsI-aDdIcTeD 2008-04-20 ch 1, | abuseCould you do another chapter? Like Lindsay's reaction or Stella and Flack's support? |
| PinkDeathNerd 2008-04-20 ch 1, | abuseI Love it, i'm glad it's not another one of those D/L make up stories. I swear if I read ONE more where they make up I'm gunna get sick :). lol But I love your story, deffantly my favorite post - right next door story. |
| katydid13 2008-04-20 ch 1, | abuseVery good! Stella's right. If they know and they don't tell Lindsay they make her feel like a fool. |
| Is-Brea-LiomCSI-NY 2008-04-20 ch 1, | abuseGreat story, very down to earth. I hope you're planning on continuing, I'd like to see what happens. |
| RockinLizzy 2008-04-20 ch 1, | abuseI really like your take on this. You write a great Flack. :) |
| preston-gal 2008-04-20 ch 1, | abuseaw i loved this and you are right everyone has been overly concerned about d/l and not about the others. |
| TessaStarDean 2008-04-20 ch 1, | abuseI love it. It's angry, it's painful, and it's honest. You got the characters right, and I love that Stella was swearing with the boys. I really think we deserve a Flack/Danny brawl when this comes out on the show. Nicely done! |
| EverythingIsConnected 2008-04-20 ch 1, | abuseWow, I liked Stella and Flack yelling at Danny XD |
| ssbailey 2008-04-20 ch 1, | abusethis was great! I think it would be a good starter for a multi-chapter fic if you wanted to write one. :) |
| The Innate Drivel Girl 2008-04-20 ch 1, | abusei like the idea of Stella nd Flack talking some sense into Danny this fanfiction makes up for the fact that the CSI: NY writers seems unwiilign to give us any definitive answer as to whether Danny has told Lindsay about sleeping with Rikki. i still can't believe he did somehtign like that Good Story Thank You. |