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MochaCocaFan
2008-08-31
ch 1,
abuseXD
FrigidSnow
2008-08-01
ch 1,
abuseCrack indeed. XD
sammich
2008-07-14
ch 1, anon.
abuseOh god. I too am disturbed. And laughing. Really hard. Epic win.
RoseyRedblood
2008-07-08
ch 1,
abuseYou've got to be really good at this or something I couldn't stop reading
Hikari Daeron
2008-07-07
ch 1,
abuseAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHA THIS MADE MY LIFE COMPLETE.
Kaira-chan15
2008-06-28
ch 1,
abuseLol that was hysterical! xD Very original idea! Nice job! Lol these parts were funny:

Ryuuk seemed to look out of the window thoughtfully as he chewed on another slice of apple. He said, “Her behind looks like an apple. It’s very round and has humps.”

“Attractive? Pretty? Bootilicious? That’s what it means, yes?”
Koneko
2008-06-19
ch 1, anon.
abuseThat's scary. My favorite line:

"The last thing I need is L being told about my mother's mysterious, invisible rapist."

Oh, no, no, no!
I Love My MnM's
2008-06-06
ch 1, anon.
abuseThat will traumatize him for the rest of his life! XDD

He coughed on his sandwich, I coughed on my coke..
WithABunny
2008-05-30
ch 1,
abuseSunset Waters...Sunset Waters! Definitely screams "soap opera", that's for sure.

My two favorite lines are these:

“Attractive? Pretty? Bootilicious? That’s what it means, yes?”

"The last thing I need is L being told of my mother’s mysterious, invisible rapist."

For the first one - well, Ryuuk certainly doesn't mince his words, does he?

Now, for that intensely disturbing-yet-incredibly-hilarious second line - oh. My. Goodness. I love how L was mentioned here. Lol, just imagine if Ryuuk decided to advance on Sachiko, and L gets thrown into the whole mess...

That would be SO cracktastic. Like this story, this wonderfully disturbing, mentally-scarring, laugh-your-guts-out crackfic.

Epic win. Epic, epic win.
Sa
2008-05-20
ch 1, anon.
abuseYOU SIR
are fucking awesome.
east-side-stories
2008-05-06
ch 1,
abuseLOL Ryuuk likin Raito's mom. NICE.
This was a good oneshot. I very much enjoyed it!!
empty dialogue
2008-04-24
ch 1,
abuseI really can't decide whether I want to laugh or vomit. XD
professorkatze
2008-04-23
ch 1,
abuse... I am intensely disturbed. I'm also trying to not fall off my chair laughing XD
Synonymous Brian
2008-04-22
ch 1,
abuse0h ew XD But hilarious, and Raito's already gay so ha! XD
Celestial Secrets
2008-04-21
ch 1,
abuseYes, bootilicious. That's EXACTLY what Ryuuk means about Raito's mom.
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