That somehow managed to be classy and yet incredibly sexy all at once. Very well done.

Na~ If only there were more. Such a devious little thing L is, and so brilliant at it too!

The scary thing-

The scary thing is I can imagine L saying, or thinking, or pondering all this. And agreed - I so wish for a lemon follow-up. Brilliantly done!

A very good one shot. Are you going to make a sequel? It would be great if you did.

oh...nice...

Oh this made me shiver. I've always adored your portrayal of these two. You make them seem human, with all the strengths and weaknesses involved in such, despite the masks and games they may show to the outside world. Poor L..

that was beautiful, and sounded to me just like L would phrase it. i love their fascination with each other. one thing death note lacked for sure was yaoi:) it's left to us fans to fix this problem^^

o.o oh boy...

This was perfect... sweet in an creepy way--just like I'd imagine L. I didn't feel anything was out of character in the least, and I was left completely speechless by your wonderful descriptions. Really amazing.
xoxox
~Ruu

Aww...^^

WOW!It leaves me speechless.You are the BEST writer I have EVER read the work of.You captured L very well.Don't stop writing!

Wish that I had read this one-shot before we had our discussion on sex. This piece is undoubtably the best way to sum up how your work progresses past simply "the act" to "the intimate" and how much that progression imbibes emotion, sensuality and intensity into it.

Beautifully descriptive.

SQUEAL!

wow i can actually see L thinking stuff like this brest job^^

"Let's have a look, then, shall we?"

:O You sound like a dentist *imagines latex covered fingers in her mouth*. Oddly, I like dentists (or hygienists, whatever you want to call them) O_o. And I'm glad that you don't do smut. Don't get me wrong! I love smut (especially well written smut *cough Nilahxapiel *cough*), but sometimes it's... unnecessary, and I think my imagination is better than another author's written smex scene.

I'm not always sure where you're going with things, and I'm not sure I can always handle such dark subjects, but you certainly don't let me down when I'm in the mood for it! Keep writing! You're what inspires me to sit down and scheme up new half-baked stories XD. I'm really pretty jealous of how well you organize your thoughts :P.

Tell me if you ever write an original story and I'll buy your book :). Yes, I love your 'stuff' just that much. Thanks for the oneshot ^^.