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| Dreamer22 2008-06-24 ch 4,  | abuse::snickers:: I love it, well done! |
| CaRiNeSs 2008-04-27 ch 4, | abuselol...glad they are okay...Jessie's parents sucked! great job! |
| Vicki-Boo 2008-04-24 ch 4, | abuseLoving your story so far! Perfect amounts of angst, drama, fluff and humour... not to mention suspense! Hope you add more... and soon! x |
| webdlfan 2008-04-24 ch 4, | abuseI like the ending, how she puts it on the shelf--that its still there. And then, of course, the need for chocolate chip cookie dough icecream. Who doesn't need that? |
| ReJo 2008-04-24 ch 4, | abusePoor Jessie! |
| laurzz 2008-04-24 ch 4, | abuseAw. i think you tied it up nicely. Loved the last line :P “Bed.”.. haha.. short and to the point! Great fic... I'm glad i read it! :) |
| Mcalison 2008-04-22 ch 3, | abuseWow, seriously can't wait for more, great story! |
| CaRiNeSs 2008-04-22 ch 3, | abusePoor Danny...he's tired...at least they are happy :) Can't wait to see what happens with the kid's parents...post more soon! |
| laurzz 2008-04-22 ch 3, | abusewow! jessie's parents in the lab. you've left me intrgiued(sp?) lol I love that she pulled a snow day on him. very sweet.. Great job here! :) |
| ReJo 2008-04-21 ch 3, | abuseAt least Nurse Peter doesn't push the issue. He's funny! I can't wait to see what goes on with Jessie's parents. |
| Mcalison 2008-04-20 ch 2, | abuseGreat start, can't wait for more! |
| Emily Rae 2008-04-20 ch 2, | abuseWow, this was really good. I definitely think you should continue! I really like the way you had Danny and Lindsay interact. It seemed really natural. I could almost picture what was happening. :) |
| webdlfan 2008-04-20 ch 2, | abuseVery good job ... I like that it isn't all good without it being overloaded with angst! Keep up the good work ... and I love that you've jumped to the point where they are back together (where they should be) :p . |
| KatKnits00 2008-04-20 ch 2, | abuseGlad to see that Danny & Lindsay are both fine and I just know that there is nothing wrong with the baby. At least Danny understands why Lindsay wants the heater turned off. |
| laurzz 2008-04-20 ch 2, | abuseAww, i loved how you explained what happened before the blast. And i loved it when she was asking Peter where he was, and he was stood in the doorway! :) I'd love for you to continue the story. i really enjoy reading it :) |